Reviews for The Embodiment of Emotion |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to drop a line saying how much I enjoyed your story. The pairing is something I'm new to and I find I really liked it a lot. |
![]() ![]() Oh my god, for I second there, no make that a minute, I thought Roxas had died! You really are a genius, you know that? This isn't the first of your works that I've read, and this story has lived up to my expectations of you. :) |
![]() ![]() Oh my God! I'm crying! Roxas! |
![]() ![]() / cute...! |
![]() ![]() I still think you're a genius. |
![]() ![]() You. Are. A. Genius. You're totally awesome at writing this stuff. |
![]() ![]() Hi! I really like this one and the previous ones. I've just been so caught up in reading it that I forgot to review. It really is awesome. I wasn't actually expecting to find a Kingdom Hearts one, but when I found it, I was overjoyed. Thanks for posting this, and keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I nearly died reading this chapter :) it was so so good! You realy nailed the characters personalities too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there! I realize it's been a while since you've finished this story, but i thought i'd share my thoughts with ya anyway! :D You deserve more reviews on this story! It was fantastic! I loved the emotion you gave all of the characters, especially Axel. The idea you had for this story was a great one, and i loved the entire thing! *~Heading over to LiveJournal to read more of your stories~* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Especially the AxelxRoxas smut... I am such a pervert for akuroku... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ; 3; It's been so long since you finished this story... I really hope that you haven't given up on the idea of writing the sequel! I love Demyx, so I was pretty excited to read it. xD What happened? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD DEMYX! *FANGIRL SQUEE OF DOOM* The second it said "sandy blond hair" I just KNEW it was Demyx. And, if Axel and Riku weren't around anymore, Demyx would be my absolute FAVORITE KH character. Awesome. *more subdued fangirl squee* Anyway, about THIS fic. :) I read the first five chapters on and was absolutely appalled by how very reviews you had, and was convinced that you'd just dropped it because of the lack of interest. Imagine my happy surprise when I found it over here a few months later! This was an awesome fic, one of the better axel/roxas ones I've read. You had me scared for a moment there when Roxas got sick, but he pulled through. Good ol' Roxas. I loved the way you portrayed the characters and though the plot was a bit unoriginal, (the main character comes back to life but is missing his memory, and his residual feelings lead him to remember everything blergh) you still managed to make it a completely individual story that I couldn't rip my eyes away from. You did a great job on this fic, and I can't wait to read about Demy :) I always feel so bad when you have to kill him in the game T_T awesome job! Miss Alise |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good! The descriptions were almost overpowering in the beginning but became more and more natural as the writing went on. Thank you so much for writing this! and now there is only one thing I can do as a fully addicted reader: get on my knees and beg you to write the rest. Please, Please, Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHOHO DEMY IN THE HOUSe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *tears* WAHAHA. Wonderful ending! *sniffs* Goodness, when I read the first part of the hcapter i was all depressed because Roxas had "died" then he wrapped his arms around Axel I was like ok, maybe it's his ghost. Then I saw one word...coma... I got up and did my happ dance (version 7 of 13). All in all great job! |