Reviews for And The Ground Shook
tylee17 chapter 13 . 12/7/2008
that angry-on-Dean's-behalf Sam? awesome!

and I loved this simple, but oh so true line:

"He was definitely not perceived as a threat, and that couldn’t possibly be a good thing." lol
tylee17 chapter 12 . 12/7/2008
at least there's that physical contact between father and sons, the kind of comfort those idiot guys are denying themselves most of the times... (:
tylee17 chapter 11 . 12/7/2008
I've had the impression John was a little slow on the uptake as soon as Dean first said Sammy was not safe in the motel all by himself (back when Dean was still in the hospital).

well, granted, I know a little more than poor John so to speak... (after all, in the meantime I have seen Dean go to hell for Sam, and return... and make that heartbreaking confession (:

you're not exactly giving me much of a break here (:
tylee17 chapter 10 . 12/7/2008
huh, did I say you're breaking my heart? let me check...

yup. already did.

guess it's close to being shattered now (:

can't help feeling reminded of those awful moments back in Devil's Trap, when Dean was begging with John, too

aww, poor kid...
tylee17 chapter 8 . 12/7/2008
loving the family interaction... and Sammy (:
tylee17 chapter 7 . 12/7/2008
if this ain't one helluva pain fest. but very well done, for it doesn't come out of the blue and thus doesn't come across as just a means for some more Dean whumpage (some people-definitely not you, LOL-don't know that the secret to writing real good "hurt!Dean" stories doesn't lie in the number of injuries inflicted...besides, plot is always nice...) (:

so: kudos to you! this story has it all.
tylee17 chapter 6 . 12/7/2008
OMG - I could so totally see it in my mind's eye... OMG

very captivating, I can tell ya! (:

very good job on that John description again, and what a hard time he is having making the right decisions.

I could have kicked poor Derek, though. I mean, come on, what with his being Dean's therapist and all he should have known something was absolutely wrong. I kept thinking "Press that stupid call button, already!"

and look at the mess we're in now! (:

(you know, I'd be dead now if I would really have to wait for the next chapter...) (:
tylee17 chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
sheesh, am I glad I can just go on reading now...

btw, the characters are all spot on!

on I go...
tylee17 chapter 2 . 12/7/2008
oh hell, you're definitely killing me here...

... well, okay, so maybe "only" breaking my heart (:

look, here:

"John swallowed hard, his heart pounding so painfully in his chest he thought it was a good thing they were at a hospital, because he might just be having a heart attack. He pulled Sam into his arms."

aww, man?

I really love your John, love your Sam, too.

love their fierce love for Dean (:

off to read on...
tylee17 chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
oh my f*ing god, what am I doing to myself, starting this story when I know I won't be able to continue reading it now.

torturing myself here... oh man.

very well done, you manage to pull the reader right into this...

well, this got my attention, I'll definitely be back. (:
Squints63 chapter 22 . 11/15/2008
You should write a sequel to this one. It was a great read.
mouse8 chapter 22 . 10/1/2008
This was a tremendously well-written and engrossing story. Yet I found the ending surprisingly sad. Poor Dean. He loses so much. It also seems so ominous. If he can't be the Guardian... Anyway, wonderful writing!
Darthnikki chapter 22 . 9/20/2008
That was fantastic, please tell me there is a sequel. Is this taking the brotherhood verse into account ? Is Dean or was Dean that kind of guardian?

Loved it x
V.R. Jennings chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Loved it! It's very, very good and very well written. Loved hurt Dean - can't seem to get enough of him :) Keep up the good work!
kirallie chapter 22 . 8/2/2008
Great story! So Dean was something special till he touched the sceptre? That's why 'she' sent him after it after being told he'd never give up Sam? Poor Dean!
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