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Guest chapter 8 . 1/14/2017
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Guest chapter 8 . 10/24/2016
Esta super perfecto me gusto la historia muy diferente y algo cómica
Born2BeGodLike chapter 2 . 7/16/2016
Send genin on S mission was little to much even if kanoha low on shinobi. A rank would has been believable at least.
Que chapter 8 . 1/6/2013
Sasuke showed Naruto mercy in the beginning. Wouldn't that hint at his redemption? Why the hell did you arbitrarily kill off a main character?
Que chapter 2 . 1/6/2013
Who the hell sends Genin on an S-rank mission?
Animefangirl95 chapter 8 . 7/29/2012
Woo great story:)
Animefangirl95 chapter 5 . 7/29/2012
Kissy kissy
Animefangirl95 chapter 4 . 7/29/2012
Wow Naruto has guts haha oh wait I knew that already
Animefangirl95 chapter 3 . 7/29/2012
Loved the POV switch
Animefangirl95 chapter 2 . 7/29/2012
Great action sequence:)
Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Great chapter:) it was a great way to start the story!
nekoken chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
hey there good story so far though I didn't like you going into Tentens falling in love with him in her thoughts. Its not good to just state she might be falling in love with him like that. If she had blushed and been confused about it with a stray thought of him being cute or somethings. Its still conveys the same thing without making the reader feel as if they are unintelligent. Also the fact that by this time in the anime they really don't know each other well and you haven't built how these sudden thoughts came about.
shockwave513 chapter 5 . 2/8/2009
just to tell you when naruto gets to the point to where he has 4 chakra tails his wounds are not goin to heal because all his skin starts to peal off and his blood mixes with the chakra
timcampy101 chapter 7 . 10/16/2008
love it
Dylan Millwood chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
I love this story and I love the NaruTen paring, enough said.
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