Reviews for The Youngest Uchihas'
Guest chapter 14 . 1/3
Hello there. :)
I've been fishing around in search of stories like yours. I'm personally very picky when it comes to what I read- and, I did notice a few grammatical errors in your piece. A prime example would be when you use "was" or "we was" instead of "were" and "we were." It bothered me to an extent. However, your intriguing plot made up for it. I simply adored your story. Also, another thing that was brought to my attention was the fact that the dialogue was a bit out of character. These aspects are minor and your other aspects trump the mistakes. I really liked it.
CrystalBud chapter 8 . 3/18/2013
Dark Blossom22 chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Grammar mistakes! Please fix them. :)
A Hidden Saint and Sinner chapter 13 . 1/17/2009
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Raawr10909 chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
cool, very cute
Innocence and Instinct chapter 13 . 7/5/2008
i likey(hmm u should do like a short one-shot to show how they have been doing after a few yrs)
Emmie chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
please write the next chapter! that was so gud! please write it soon!
kyNa-chAn chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
wOW! hOw cAn dAt bE? thEy aRe oNly -13-! they are sUch bAd chiLdreN! bUt yOu hAve an awesOme and whAky miNd to think of that! (_)
Haru no hana chapter 14 . 10/29/2007

muito lindo! perfeito! AW amei muito a sua fic xD

perfect!, cute! beatibul! i loved ur fic soo much

in the beggining of the fic, i was thinking in the idea of kill sasuke

for doing that to sakura

but now i love him *-*

and love the twins...

why dont u write a fic with then, when they become gennin and learn how to use sharingan and stuf?

and sasuke teaching then to use de fire ball jutsu?


bye bye o/
Sailor Pandabear chapter 13 . 9/2/2007
there is only one word for this: Yahoo!
nicky chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
WTH, your making 12 year olds have sex. thats just wrong, and besides, how can they have sex when one doesnt even like the other, so he says and still heve sex! thats messed
sakuraturtle chapter 13 . 8/19/2007
XXRedWolfXX chapter 13 . 8/2/2007
I really Liked it!
dream.for.a.dream chapter 14 . 8/1/2007
hm...the story sounds good...though there are little flaws in grammar...nothing important though! and...being as sasusaku ain't my favorite sure not to make sakura a fan-girl, kay? 'cuz if she's not a fan-girl...she's really great! bye-bye
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