|Reviews for Don't Be Naive|
| Lotusnapper chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
I like how both May and Drew try to remain calm, yet have an sense being nervous around each other, plus the interrogation was amusing. I think this story has potential and that you should continue. Much enjoyed and well written.
| Lotusnapper chapter 2 . 7/9/2010
I like the irony in this chapter and how it contrasts with the last chapter. The beginning was just so amusing, as well as the last sentence, plus very well written.
| Lotusnapper chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
This is really pleasant. The writing style is fresh, and it is done rather well. I like how well everyone is in character, plus May changing emotions, also how the last paragraph has a hopeful and postive outlook.
| PotoPerson chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
I'm still here and interested! I don't blame you for it! I love the akward situation you created here. Can't wait to see how this ends up.
Keep on writing! ;D
| Computer Pikachu chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
haha *interested* ;)
i like this one!
cant wait for an update
| Pikoxu chapter 3 . 7/8/2010
I'M INTERESTED I'M INTERESTED! New chapter please :D
| xxxxMayDrewxxxx chapter 2 . 12/31/2009
Wow, so when's he nex chaper coming?*Grea sory!*
| hilltop2492 chapter 2 . 6/21/2008
I love this story XD Very cute.
Just as a side note, Misty has three older sisters, making her the youngest sister of four, not three.
Keep up the good work!
| Alexandria J chapter 2 . 6/21/2008
LOL O yea now 4 the good parts!
| PotoPerson chapter 2 . 6/20/2008
Yeah, I could definitly imagine Brock behind iron bars calling to his dear officer Jenny...teehee! Well anyways, nice story so far. I eagerly await the next chapter!
keep writing! ;D
| F. E. M. Darkblitz chapter 2 . 6/20/2008
Heh, I just noticed - you haven't updated in over a year and a half. And I've seen stories that begin with AH! I HAVEN'T UPDATED IN TWO DAYS! SO SORRY! (No offense to those who wrote such thing). It's just kinda weird. Anyway, Drew's probably thinking, Oh, snap.
Peace and live long and prosper!
| Christine chapter 2 . 6/20/2008
update update update! i love your story!
| Alexandria J chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Obviously, u aren't gonna continue this, because it was done in '06. Man, that's really a waste, I liked the 1st chapter though, I had wanted to see what'd happen next.
| flamesoul chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
| empty.journal chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
Please, if this doesn't bother you, try to update this. It looks very promising to me.