Reviews for Don't Be Naive
Lotusnapper chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
I like how both May and Drew try to remain calm, yet have an sense being nervous around each other, plus the interrogation was amusing. I think this story has potential and that you should continue. Much enjoyed and well written.
Lotusnapper chapter 2 . 7/9/2010
I like the irony in this chapter and how it contrasts with the last chapter. The beginning was just so amusing, as well as the last sentence, plus very well written.
Lotusnapper chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
This is really pleasant. The writing style is fresh, and it is done rather well. I like how well everyone is in character, plus May changing emotions, also how the last paragraph has a hopeful and postive outlook.
PotoPerson chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
I'm still here and interested! I don't blame you for it! I love the akward situation you created here. Can't wait to see how this ends up.

Keep on writing! ;D
Computer Pikachu chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
haha *interested* ;)

i like this one!

cant wait for an update
Pikoxu chapter 3 . 7/8/2010
I'M INTERESTED I'M INTERESTED! New chapter please :D
xxxxMayDrewxxxx chapter 2 . 12/31/2009
Wow, so when's he nex chaper coming?*Grea sory!*
hilltop2492 chapter 2 . 6/21/2008
I love this story XD Very cute.

Just as a side note, Misty has three older sisters, making her the youngest sister of four, not three.

Keep up the good work!
Alexandria J chapter 2 . 6/21/2008
LOL O yea now 4 the good parts!

PotoPerson chapter 2 . 6/20/2008
Yeah, I could definitly imagine Brock behind iron bars calling to his dear officer Jenny...teehee! Well anyways, nice story so far. I eagerly await the next chapter!

keep writing! ;D
F. E. M. Darkblitz chapter 2 . 6/20/2008
Heh, I just noticed - you haven't updated in over a year and a half. And I've seen stories that begin with AH! I HAVEN'T UPDATED IN TWO DAYS! SO SORRY! (No offense to those who wrote such thing). It's just kinda weird. Anyway, Drew's probably thinking, Oh, snap.

Peace and live long and prosper!
Christine chapter 2 . 6/20/2008
update update update! i love your story!
Alexandria J chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Obviously, u aren't gonna continue this, because it was done in '06. Man, that's really a waste, I liked the 1st chapter though, I had wanted to see what'd happen next.
flamesoul chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
empty.journal chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
Please, if this doesn't bother you, try to update this. It looks very promising to me.

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