Reviews for Under the Mistletoe |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LOL, sounds like something Dumbledore would do, the mistletoe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWW! that was cute! ~Smiles~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Kit-Kat!... I want Kit-kat now!... thank u T_T now is too late... T_T tomorrow... err... Y_Y Oliver's mom can be muggle, he don't know about basket!... u_u a less that... I dont know,... she doesn't have contact with the muggle world... o.O er... xDD I don't think like this. It's not muggle, and this is your fic, and my coment is stupid. xD Oliver could be a 'pureblood' xD Well... se you! Lalwens |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, is it just me, or is Wood REALLY suited for those one-shots? :D Overall, very fluffy, very cute, and EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT voice! Loved Katie's personality; she basically has none in the book, so it's nice to experiment with minor characters. My only criticism is that Wood seems just a bit out of character; it's nothing dramatic or serious, but calling Katie "Kit-Kat" seemed very out of place (but I do know why you inserted that in there). Also-and I know I am nitpicking here-but I don't think Wood has any Muggle experience, just because in the first book Harry says something about Quidditch resembling basketball and Wood replies, "What's basketball?" :P This could develop into something more-you could totally write a prequel to this, with your strong Katie character. Good job! Check out my Oliver story...though I think he may be OOC in it, too, now that I think of it. :D I hope I see more from you! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aw super cute ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet. |