|Reviews for A new life in a new land|
| koshikaden chapter 60 . 9/24/2017
For the story idea narutoxmariokart. Run with it. The bloopers are still funny especially them jumping dem bones and the shinobi jackhammer. During some of the chapters I thought of bloopers for arashi and akane. Consider it a gift from a fan and a friend in the sequel. I can PM you the chapter numbers from this story so you can work them in the sequel. Those two should suffer and my prank on akane. Honestly I think there could have a blooper of the fashion show and one of naruto becoming natsumi. The story is finished yes, but the past can come back to haunt them. Still laughed at the Halloween special with naruto going simple to prank akane and it worked. Still going to read the movie chapters. I think I just about favorite all of your stories. This story is still one of the best.
| koshikaden chapter 9 . 9/21/2017
Reading the story again and the prank still gives me laughs.
| brutusjr chapter 53 . 2/22/2016
Great story, but I'm getting a little tired of all these ridiculous holiday and side stories. Santa Claus?!
| slythian chapter 62 . 9/11/2015
great story all around and i garentee ill be reading the sequel
| Dr.D 101 chapter 58 . 4/1/2014
hey mann i almost cried in this chapter especially wen listening to ( a vampire's lullaby by Mezume Omachi·) you got to try it
| Makesushi chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Ummmm, I think your story has AMAZING potential, but your oc is painfully over powered. Maybe if you re-write, give her a weakness for every strength.
If my character was fighting an enemy that was stronger then them, they would have to use their team mates to fight him, letting them do most if not all the work. This would lead to growth in your oc, to determine if their selfish and don't care to improve, even to their friends dieing breath, if they want to improve to be 'true ninja' and after years of hardship and struggle are finally able to achieve greatness, or lastly unable to become stronger because of a defect in their genes and stop being a ninja or die.
I hope you at least take in some of my ideas, I only want to help you.
| Lerris chapter 3 . 1/31/2014
Kasumi has too much power too young. Four tails plus whatever boost her transformation gets... Also being something like 20 mentally at that point plus being raised in Hokage's family meant she shouldn't have fell for that...
| koshikaden chapter 62 . 11/11/2013
The movie was just awesome and brilliant, the bloopers were needed and funny, and the story was just epic.
| Dill Dragon chapter 16 . 6/23/2013
Santa as a NINJA!? Good LORD I love ya. D that has the be one of the most awsomely crazy ideas I've ever seen!
| Dill dragon chapter 9 . 6/14/2013
The whole genuutsu fiasco was freakin' hilarious. XD
| Drakius Marethyu Damnati chapter 59 . 4/6/2013
I love this story.
| Drakius Marethyu Damnati chapter 24 . 4/4/2013
| Zumagirl chapter 10 . 11/19/2012
you seem to have a knack for long chapters
| Zumagirl chapter 9 . 11/19/2012
i love this story.
| YubelHaouJudai chapter 2 . 10/24/2012
THis so beatiful