Reviews for At the bottom of an ocean |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Soooo...is there a chance you'll update this, cause I've just re-read it and BOY do I want to read more. Pleeeease? With chocolate on top? I need to know if the Team can fix this or if Kevin wins. I'm undecided which option I want more. One the one hand, I really love redemption stories and thus want his old team to rise to the occasion and get him back - and treat him more like a person and less like a useful tool. On the other hand, it would serve them right if Ryoma still chose Kevin. Kevin, at least, was nice to him. Hmmmm, I wonder if it couldn't be a combination. Kevin helping the Team against Ryoma's Dad (who has some serious abusive gaslighting problems, to say the least). |
![]() ![]() ![]() they don't know his existence but ryoga can be the one ryoma wants to please. maybe... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story, really. It is amazing how the slap was a catalyst for the underlying problem to appear. I do hope there will be a 10th Chapter and I absolutely love the rumor mile Yuuta started in his own by making a thoughtless exclamation. I am intrested to see if Kevin will appear again and love the bonding between Fuji and Ryoma Good work keep going |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad things are looking up for Tezuka and Ryoma has Fuji looking out for him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. I like how the incident was a catalyst for underlying problems with Ryoma. I love chapter 5. I didn't like that he felt he had the right to put his hands on Ryoma. That never did sit right with me in the anime but the anime was good otherwise. |
![]() ![]() It's just a slap. Not physical abuse. Just a slap. It's pretty common in the world. And guess what children end up less spoilt than the stupid standards set in Western world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn it, I was crying for 9 chapters straight! Now my eyes will be puffy tomorrow! And it's YOUR fault! _ Okay, so... the story was amazing. I... I want more. Please. PLEASE...! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup, that's how rumor mills work, sweetie. Get them start and they grow into horrible, horrible things of torture. Minds have been known to explode. *winks* *cackles as she rubs her hands together evilly* Yessss. Whoop Ryoma's Dad's butt! Make him pay! I never liked how he pushed Ryoma to only do tennis, and then belittle him. Grrrrr! Make. Him. PAY! Update? Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every time I come back to read this story, my heart breaks all over again. This is true angst in it’s finest form; Ryoma’s innocence is just what hits me until I start to feel like crying for him. I relate to this Ryoma in many ways —the need to meet others expectations is a huge burden to carry, and I’m glad that he is opening up to Fuji, that he’s learned that it’s not a necessary task to appease to his father. Though I know it’s been many (many) years since an update, I’m sorta glad it ends (for now) in the typical PoT crazy humour —that way, my broken heart is healed and I can hug laugh. Thank you for contributing this wonderful yet very (very) heartbreaking story to the community. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please please please will u update again please I only read it just now and to be frank u made me cry while i was reading this... I can't wait for fuji's confrontation with ryoma's father it will be interesting... I hope we will see ryoma act as a child more after this he is so cute hehehe I hope ur muse return to u and inspiration strike u so u could write again this is one of the stories i cry just in reading and i didn't realize it Hope u are doing well :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue writing! I love this story! I want to know what will be fuji's reaction when he heard that Yuuta is in love with ryoma |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now here is an other awesome fic. I like how you did a different look out of Echizen's reaction when Tezuka backhanded him in the anime. I would love to see how the story ends, if you decide to finish it. :) :) :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please,please,PLEASE continue writing! I really want to know what happens now that everyone thinks that Yuuta is in love with Ryoma. I can't wait to hear their reactions. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work hope you update soon love you and bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please post more. you can't just leave it like that. great story. |