|Reviews for At the bottom of an ocean|
| Tamuril2 chapter 8 . 2/13
Soooo...is there a chance you'll update this, cause I've just re-read it and BOY do I want to read more. Pleeeease? With chocolate on top? I need to know if the Team can fix this or if Kevin wins. I'm undecided which option I want more.
One the one hand, I really love redemption stories and thus want his old team to rise to the occasion and get him back - and treat him more like a person and less like a useful tool.
On the other hand, it would serve them right if Ryoma still chose Kevin. Kevin, at least, was nice to him.
Hmmmm, I wonder if it couldn't be a combination. Kevin helping the Team against Ryoma's Dad (who has some serious abusive gaslighting problems, to say the least).
| nanashi-noname09 chapter 8 . 10/31/2020
they don't know his existence but ryoga can be the one ryoma wants to please. maybe...
| Byakuri chapter 9 . 9/22/2020
Amazing story, really.
It is amazing how the slap was a catalyst for the underlying problem to appear.
I do hope there will be a 10th Chapter and I absolutely love the rumor mile Yuuta started in his own by making a thoughtless exclamation.
I am intrested to see if Kevin will appear again and love the bonding between Fuji and Ryoma
Good work keep going
| amainage chapter 6 . 8/26/2020
Glad things are looking up for Tezuka and Ryoma has Fuji looking out for him.
| amainage chapter 5 . 8/26/2020
Nice story. I like how the incident was a catalyst for underlying problems with Ryoma. I love chapter 5. I didn't like that he felt he had the right to put his hands on Ryoma. That never did sit right with me in the anime but the anime was good otherwise.
| justaslap chapter 2 . 3/23/2020
It's just a slap. Not physical abuse. Just a slap. It's pretty common in the world. And guess what children end up less spoilt than the stupid standards set in Western world.
| Dryadenblut chapter 9 . 12/21/2019
Damn it, I was crying for 9 chapters straight! Now my eyes will be puffy tomorrow! And it's YOUR fault! _
Okay, so... the story was amazing. I... I want more. Please. PLEASE...! _
| Tamuril2 chapter 9 . 12/8/2018
Yup, that's how rumor mills work, sweetie. Get them start and they grow into horrible, horrible things of torture. Minds have been known to explode. *winks*
*cackles as she rubs her hands together evilly* Yessss. Whoop Ryoma's Dad's butt! Make him pay! I never liked how he pushed Ryoma to only do tennis, and then belittle him. Grrrrr! Make. Him. PAY!
| Misslabelled chapter 9 . 12/29/2017
Every time I come back to read this story, my heart breaks all over again. This is true angst in it’s finest form; Ryoma’s innocence is just what hits me until I start to feel like crying for him. I relate to this Ryoma in many ways —the need to meet others expectations is a huge burden to carry, and I’m glad that he is opening up to Fuji, that he’s learned that it’s not a necessary task to appease to his father. Though I know it’s been many (many) years since an update, I’m sorta glad it ends (for now) in the typical PoT crazy humour —that way, my broken heart is healed and I can hug laugh. Thank you for contributing this wonderful yet very (very) heartbreaking story to the community.
| rozielrie chapter 9 . 9/6/2017
Please please please will u update again please
I only read it just now and to be frank u made me cry while i was reading this...
I can't wait for fuji's confrontation with ryoma's father it will be interesting...
I hope we will see ryoma act as a child more after this he is so cute hehehe
I hope ur muse return to u and inspiration strike u so u could write again this is one of the stories i cry just in reading and i didn't realize it
Hope u are doing well :D
| Nicole218 chapter 9 . 4/18/2017
please continue writing! I love this story! I want to know what will be fuji's reaction when he heard that Yuuta is in love with ryoma
| Rika100 chapter 9 . 3/1/2017
Now here is an other awesome fic. I like how you did a different look out of Echizen's reaction when Tezuka backhanded him in the anime. I would love to see how the story ends, if you decide to finish it. :) :) :)
| Ari27 chapter 9 . 12/30/2016
Please,please,PLEASE continue writing! I really want to know what happens now that everyone thinks that Yuuta is in love with Ryoma. I can't wait to hear their reactions. :)
| Gaining Odd Opinions At Times chapter 9 . 12/3/2016
Great work hope you update soon love you and bye
| ParkerReid15 chapter 9 . 10/22/2016
Please post more. you can't just leave it like that. great story.