Reviews for Autumn Leaf
n00b-masta2112 chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
Another gorgeous work of art, Nessie. You are absoloutely amazing. So talented. Awesome fic, I loved the metaphor you used.
Waveless0Emotions chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
so good!1
HRH-The-Otaku-Queen chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
That is definitely cute. I enjoyed the little oneshot. . It made me very happy!

And that little phrase about the Uchiha name blooming w/ a new bud was very poetic.

Feel proud.

Now, let's click the favorite stories list and put it in there...WALLA. It's now there.

Ja ne!

nothing but blue chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
sniffles. that was beautiful!
o.O chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
it's really good...does anyone the the fanfiction about tenten and neji where she is using tessen and when neji kisses her at the end she hits him over the head with it? D
DemonGirl11 chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
I have to say that this was very well-written. You had a good extended meetaphor going.
Sakurabear47 chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
yihee! i love this! super!
lumoslumiere chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
Wow! This is beautiful, I love the way you write and characterize Sasuke. As a writer of SasuSaku myself I find it very hard to find the right characterization of Sasuke and maintain it, but you do a great job at it. Not only that, the plot was just really good. :D

BTW, I also love your Neji/Tenten works.
dreamlifter chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
Very well written. I liked how Sakura was depicted and Sasuke too. If there is a criticism I would have to say the analogy to autumn leaf just didn't work for me. Felt kinda forced. The story itself was very strong. Although I don't think anyone *but* sakura and naruto, live. It was a cool story.

One thing that would make the story better was if you take out the line about sasuke looking back years later. The reader & story will have suspense about what sakura will do or if sasuke will live through this encounter without that line. With it in there, most of the tension was killed.

As always, great job
GraphiteHeron chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
This was rather open-ended, and yet it ties off so well. Room to stop, and room to continue as the fancy catches you. I don't know if I've ever read such a good ending to any given story. I know it's a strange part of the story to obsess over - the closing - but you managed something incredibly unique, rare even. What comes before the closing is just as exquisite. Balance, imagery, rhythm, and it flows from beginning to end smoothly. This, it defies description, and somehow, saying, "Wow, this is really good," seems hollow. Empty. Inadequate.
2supersmart chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
wow totally awesome and well-written. i like your nejiten fics a lot too; it's my second fav couple...or at least the second largest amount of fics i read are nejitens. i'm really glad you decided to write a sasusaku though
hushhushyou chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
That was very profound. I liked your analogy. (I'm not sure if I should call it that? Or a metaphor? I dunno lol) Anyway, very well done! I loved it :D
iMissa chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Ack yayerz! I loved it! The characters were really ic, and I could definately see this happening. Great job!
Crystal Koneko chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Loved it!
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