Reviews for Stay
seamist chapter 6 . 9/19/2014
oh how I love it...
it really made me cry.
glad he stayed.
thepinkmartini chapter 6 . 8/1/2009
that was so sweet and angsty! tofuu for the win!
thepinkmartini chapter 4 . 8/1/2009
very very introspective.
thepinkmartini chapter 2 . 8/1/2009
that was so sad! poor tokiya.
sobermansober chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
what a coward! why does he have to leave her?

if love isn't enough, then the world will be a lonely place...

he should have stayed... he's making her feel small...

anyway, you've got some pretty amazing style there, using tokiya's pov to narrate his feelings. course, he wouldn't really know what she thinks now, eh? and that makes it even more credulous cause them we have to think like tokiya. oh... am getting so engrossed in this. wow! you really made me appreciate the dialogue and the long paragraphs... cause tokiya is so much like a reserved person... aw... love it!
Blackrose2005 chapter 6 . 7/21/2007
AW! That was awesome!

It was short, but very sweet!
Blackrose2005 chapter 5 . 7/21/2007
*Sniff* So sad! T~T
Blackrose2005 chapter 2 . 7/21/2007
Sad... So sad! T~T

I didin't think that she could go with Kurei, but this is all a fic, and ut's interesting how Mi-Chan acted!
Blackrose2005 chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
Wow, I really like this!
inustorm chapter 6 . 5/3/2007
KAWAII! i LOVE it! but too much drama...but anyway it was very potrayed his feelings with a depth unimaginable wow! loved it keep writing!
inustorm chapter 5 . 5/3/2007
ah! kurei! yuck! but ur fic so no offense...but waah! toki is leaving! darling mi-chan is running away...AGAIN! you'd think he understood it wasn't the answer but no! he just has to leave!
inustorm chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
i like it and you do have a point lol we really dont know what he's thinking lol so well...i liked it a lot! but i prefer happy fics cuz i myself write too many sad ones lol
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 6 . 4/8/2007
DR4G0lV chapter 6 . 3/20/2007
Very good.
Shenhui chapter 6 . 2/18/2007
*was kissing Kurei passionately* Huh? Oh.. *flashes the ring on her right finger* You don't have to tell me that..*smiles sweetly* we're already married..bwahahahaha...

I like the chapter! It made me giddy!.. I'm so glad it's not sad.. though Mi-chan was really stupid I'm glad it all worked out for the best..hahahaha...

Congratulations on making a very good story...*hugs*

Now I'm off reading frost!.. yay!
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