i really hope you will continue the about the two couple.. i love it! XD

You're right that would be a challenge...but I think you handled it very well.

Amzing oneshots! I loved them both and think you a lot of writing talent! The only error I really spotted was your paragraphs, you need to start a new paragraph every time a different person speaks, two people cannot have lines in the same paragraph. That was it, really. I cannot wait for the update!

The Nuriko/Honotori one made me so happy yet so sad; I've always felt so sorry for Nuriko in the anime. *Strangles Miaka*

OH! -blush- I LOVE the Hotohori and Nuriko pairing! They both died in the end so in that sense they are together...(honestly what I tell myself) Nuriko was my FAVORITE character and though I LOVE angst why'd HE have to die! Couldn't they use Suzaku to bring him back like one of the wish's? ANYWAY I LOVED this but the paragraphs were long making it hard for me to read it...but I still loved it! You did a great job!

Yes, really, really great. **o

You did a good job on describing the characters. *Which, I must tell you, made me feel as if I'm them.*

though you should've at least added more detail on the introduction and when Hotohori asked Nuriko to come with him to his private chambers since the story seemed a little too focused to the 'being intimate' part thus making the story look a little short.

BUT I love it, love the fic. :) Keep up that good work. :)

CIAO.

that...was...awesome...i am speachless! i liked it! of all the characters you could have paired you chose hitohori and nuriko! the cherry blossoms landing on his chest...priceless! ;3 you most add another chapter to this! XD

That was beautifully written! Well done:) I couldn't help but laugh when I read 'royal nipple' I'd never have thought to put that, very clever:D

I think you captured the characters well and it was perfectly descriptive, which is great!

So, keep up the good work...

i liked how you made sure to include details of suzaku. i wasn't too impressed with the characters, though. nuriko was extremely ooc. ;

keep writing! i can't wait to read more of your work.

thats so cute! lol... i loved nuriko and hotohori and i was kinda down when nuriko died... this is very cool!

Loved it loved it

that was great! you did such a good job! loved your fanfic. so awesome! please do continue

I like the story...but...It seems that the focus of your story is on the part when the two of them are alone inside that room. Well, I'll wait for the continuation of this story...;)