|Reviews for Everyday|
| jorie chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
oh so cruel :(
| XxCaroxX chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
im kinda confused O.o lol but it was good :)
| Tragon chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
So good yet so sad she dies!
| A Nameless Nobody chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
I. Loved. It. Like all of your stories, it was dark, twisted... And absolutely delicious. Call be a frickin physco bitch or whatever but I thoguht it was quite funny at the end. Actually, my wierd ass cracked up. Brilliant, angel puppeteer, just brilliant.
| Evil-Chibi-Tiffy chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Awww… that was sad. :'( poor Sasuke! This oneshots gonna make me cry…
| Breezybiatch chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
I mean, it could have potentially been a great story. But the tone is way off. It's ... it lacks maturity. And it's doesnt flow. The beginning and the end seem taken apart from two different stories. I mean, is this supposed to be sweet? I don't get why she would die in 24 hours and from what and why he wouldnt have know way in advance and why she'd chose to do this, not only that, why lead him on? What would he gain? In the end she new she would not marry him even if he DID follow through on his bargain, so in the end she's the one who broke the promis. I dunno, I'm giving this story to much thought and it really does not deserve it.
| miniKa chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
Someone heal my heart! I CAN'T STAND IT! *sob*
| alphaladywolf chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
How did she die? Really sad and unexpected ending.
| Ekun-Asha chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
| florever chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
omg...frickin sad. T_T
| animekraze chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
To sum it up: strange.
Is it, quite possibly, a troll fic? Maybe. Is it serious? Perhaps. In the end, it's a huge wall banger.
It's unexpected-that's the strong point. There's a weird poignancy that follows after the last line. The fic itself has a strange pace. It flows like any other at first, then slips into something desperate. The ending is dark, but handled oddly lightly. It's something to read, you're opinion on its quality.
| nartog chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
ok an interesting story but a huge plothole , i mean how did she die ?
Did she comit suicide , had cancer , heart failure .
Dont get me wrong i get the story's moral but the no explanation death kinda ruins it for me .
| zunaira ghazal chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
God you're so...diabolical!
| 0.0' Kahli hime chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
oh please... that was so sad... D;
Poor sasuke-kun D;
| Wisteria Oleander chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Is she...? how poor Sasuke...