Reviews for Incognito
Aesha chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
Wow, interesting first chapter. Hmm.. I wonder what will happen next, can't wait to find out! What I really liked about your story was how you re-used the idea of Sakura disguising as a boy. To tell you honestly, I've seen that idea used so many times on FF-net, but none of them really intrigued me- the stories were basically identicals of each other. I was actually happy to see that you added more to the idea and turned it into something uniquely yours. Really nice!

I really don't have much to say, except.. great job on the first chapter! Although, I saw a little slide error in the content, where it said: "She has been training with me ever since she was five tears old", I think you meant to say 'years'.. Hehe. Nothing biggie. I do that A LOT.. darn them letters on the keypad being too close to each other. Other than that little error, everything else was good!

Keep up the good work so far, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter!


AnG3L z LoV3R
Flightless Fantasy chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
there were a few awkward spots in the beginning but other then that it was great! plez write more _
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