Reviews for Can't Be
Gotaru chapter 1 . 7/9/2017
I feel so broken-hearted right now... but I also want to punch him in the face SO MUCH AND SO FREAKING HARD. Christ, Mustang...!
Yuu3 chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Well, at this point of time the only thing I can say to Ed is, "Feel free to punch Colonel Bastard in the face. With your right metal arm."
starshipranger99 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Why? Why did you have to write this? I'm dying on the inside right now... Even if it was really good... Really good job by the way...
PerforatedFiction chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Omg D:
It was good but heart breaking
I love and hate it at the same time
CookiesBunny chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
As depressing as this is, I like the idea that a girl Ed's own age wouldn't fit because of his goals and all he's seen. Well written
Fun-Sized Kirk chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
So freakin epic and well written. Great job.
SacrificedAlice chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Your quality of writing is impeccable. It's intensely beautiful, and I love the way you describe everything.

There's something about the combination of tense, first person, and general style that makes it all the more heartbreaking to read. I think it's the sense of detachment. I don't know if that was teh intention, but it works. Extremely well.

A brilliant piece of writing, well done and thank you.
AlchemyOtaku0922 chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
How sad :/ I don't particularly like this couple, but I did like this story! Good job :) Poor Ed must be heatbroken :(
MyDirtyLittleSecret chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Awwww poor Roy. He did do the right thing. Great lil ficlet.
killing u with umbrellas chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
it's sad. but good.
Spoon10488 chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
Poor roy and ed. good story, kind of poetic.
CCILoveSparklesCC chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
This is beautiful. You are a wonderful writer and really set the bar.



Abused-Little-Raven chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
*sniffs* now I want to cry... T.T I did like it though...
Mon Petit Pierrot chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Aw, that was so sad. I almost cried. That was beautifully written. I really enjoyed it.
shinespire chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
i think i've run out of things to say about the quality of your writing without repeating myself. So just a quick review that i can not fault the story at all, and you should be proud of your writing talent
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