Reviews for Crash Into Me
ftmill16 chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
I know this story is nearly 5 yrs old, and honestly, I've read it before but I just really feel compelled to leave a review. I think you did an amazing job with this. It was so completely in character from Jim just knowing almost immediately that something serious was wrong with Pam to the theme woven throughout the story of Jim strong desire, actually I would say his strong need to take care of Pam and always be there for her. The ending was a sweet little treat with them having gotten together, Pam being betteer and having a baby on the way. I know some have been bothered that you weren't specific enough about Pam's illness but IMO you told us enough for us to be able to figure out that it was cancer or something serious. I just didn't feel the need for it to be any more specific. Honestly, my only problem was the was this was formatted. Sometimes I had to back up a bit and realize it was a new 'scene' and not a continuation of the last one. Just would have been nice to have at least an extra space between lines or something.

Overall a great piece and though it had sad moments it was an easy read. Great job!
Malon A. Lupin chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
OK, this has the potential to be really good but you have to not be so vague. Subtle is nice but not subtely for subtlety's sake (hahaha...i just referenced Dwight without meaning to...i watch this show too much). I'm *guessing* Pam has cancer and is undergoing some kind of chemo? Be more specific. make it more descriptive. would love to know more about whats happening!
Krazi Kelli chapter 1 . 12/27/2006
aw, this was really cute! i was worried that it might have a sad ending, but i was happily surpised! :) you did a really good job! yea! lol :)
xXxlilnoel09xXx chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
Aww! How sweet! Stayed in character very well. :D
Padfoot Reincarnated chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
Aw, sweet. I love the ending.
Aracalien chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
I'm a little confused-what was wrong with Pam? Cancer? Well anyway I really like this fic and I love the idea of Jim being there for Pam when she really needs him. Good job.
Verity Kindle chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Wonderfully well written!