|Reviews for The Carpe Felis Series|
| maipigen chapter 4 . 2/29/2012
really great, i liked the setting, making it easy to see in my mind even though i haven't watched dark angel in years.
i love heat stories;)
hoping for more even though it is ages since you wrote this.
| MaddAlice chapter 4 . 2/6/2012
The story was wonderful and your characterization was top-notch!
| yunadustrial.twifan chapter 4 . 1/1/2012
this is awsome.
| gilo chapter 22 . 1/8/2011
haha hilarious! i love it! amazing! i hope there are more missing scenes to come or even maybe some future ones? :D
| Illucida chapter 15 . 1/7/2011
This has been a fun series. You kept them in character, which I applaud. The number one thing about the MaxAlec pairing, is that writers usually have them out of character. Good work!
| Rishtalak chapter 15 . 12/5/2010
Squall Leonhart, FF8! Let's just hope the kid doesn't have the angsty-mofo attitude...
| Tuuna chapter 22 . 9/10/2010
ohh I just love the whole mood of this fic :D:D and btw awesome that you added the smut and the pizza delivery scene? Totally brilliant :D:D though... Max should say the magical words as well :P
| Tim C. Girl chapter 22 . 8/10/2010
Okay, I'm repeating myself, but I really like your Max & Alec. And this story was awesome. Too bad you never added anything more, I really liked the mix of sweet and angry moments :)
| ShiruyTheSecond chapter 22 . 7/14/2010
Woo, I liked this story a lot. Nice pacing, good development, believable characters. Good job!
| superscar chapter 3 . 7/7/2010
And... we're back.
To the absolutely hilarious fight with Joshua.
I love a good mix of humor and angst. He wants her enough to fight his friends and get carted around like a child, but he doesn't want her to hate him and it is so damn sweet.
"Black eye, teeth marks, hickeys, scratches, bruises, strained muscles, and chafing aside, I felt phenomenal." HAH!
"Or maybe she'd smile, thank me, and give me a blowjob." I also reacted with 'Hah!' to this, but more of a 'Hah, good luck with that.'
""I'm not hungry." Well, at least it was a response, choked though it was. I bit back the urge to say something clever about her appetite – even I knew this wasn't the time." - Look at that self-preservation instinct, hard at work. I still laugh at how quickly he would have died, though.
"Max, I have no pants."
This is basically my favorite line ever.
"A/N: I'm going to take a one small liberty, here. In my world, even Manticore doctors can't fix a bullet to the brain. Zack is dead, and will stay dead." - AND HE HAD NO HEART. WTF!
"Or maybe she was here to… tell me she had missed me?" Every piece of my girlie heart wanted to just squnch him.
The whole Ben/Rachel discussion was great. Hmm. Ben/Rachel, interesting.
I liked the repetition of 'something sturdier for next time.'
The way you chose for him to find out she's pregnant was absolutely awesome. From her hitting him to the whole have sex/not have sex argument. The voicemail? Excellent.
"I mean, shit, what if it did have a tail?"
"It also made him look a lot like Max, which meant I was being glared at twice as often.
I kind of liked it." Hee!
The "Doug" chapter is all forms of wonderful. Mostly in the comedic way.
"Well, if drowned rats weren't, you know, dead"- This is the way my brain works as well, the off-handed qualifier way.
I love Normal's congratulations. I love Normal in general.
The satisfaction in having Alec point out that Max never went to Logan for heat relief was absolute. This is happiness that I feel right now.
"Logan opened the door and poked in his stupid, glasses-wearing, smug, superior, unwanted, interrupting head. "- He's always been an interrupting head. I've always felt that way.
You know, on the second reading, I somehow missed when he said the thing about how a mix of them both, aka the child would be an utter nightmare, but it was fucking hilarious so I thought I'd mention it even if it wasn't in order.
Happy continued writing with whatever it is you're working on.
| superscar chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Okay, I read this one before too, but I'm going back through because A, I'm nice like that sometimes, B, I have work for another six hours, oh wait, five, but still... and C, I really don't mind reading it again. I will endeavor to survive.
So, first, I have to discuss how insanely much I love Borrowed Time, just as an episode (minus the gossamer thing I could have done without and the M/L tonsil hockey everyone could have done without) and I absolutely loved the pool game, even though Alec lost. I actually liked it better because of that because I love him, but he needed losing. But also, I love the look in Max's eye watching him.
Don't worry, I'll get to your story.
"Seize the cat" is great. I love heat fics. Everyone needs at least one and needs to read about 300. Also, it is possible I've read this fic before, awhile ago, cause it was familiar beyond just the fact that I've read about a million heat fics. So if I've reviewed already, sorry... I'm sure you'll be really broken up about it.
"Maaax…" She smiled. "C'mon, fifty bucks, and you get to humble your old buddy Alec." I slid the fifty into my back pocket. In the unlikely – no, make that nigh-impossible — event that she did win, I would make her get the fifty herself.- I hope to dream about this tonight. With me in the Max role.
""Whaddaya say, pal? Play me in a little game of pool?" I kept my voice light, but he knew what I meant and I knew he knew. "
This whole thing is so hot. I love the competition and how it is all about Max every step of the way and she knows it, too, the little bitch.
Can I just say, also, that I love your use of first person? Most of the time I find it irritating, but not here.
"Max named me. She's the only one who could use my name like that."
Love the mention of that here.
"Admittedly, I was distracted. Alcohol and extreme hormonal urges will do that. And it wasn't just directions I was forgetting. Sure, I remembered basic necessities – my keys, for instance, and my motorcycle helmet – but I forgot some other things. Like underwear. And my shoes."
This was just an awesome image and also, hilarious.
God, I am right in the middle of this awesome fight with Joshua and I have to go to lunch. But I will be back.
| MafiaPrincess09 chapter 22 . 5/27/2010
I loved it! This was a great story, and I enjoyed reading it. :)
| fangiosfriend chapter 22 . 4/13/2010
OK it's now 2am and my eyeballs feel like they will pop out and roll across the floor- but because you wrote such a funny, sexy yummy Alec story - you get a final review from me and hopefully enough happy gooey flutters to compel you to write another chapter of this beautifully written gorgeously faithful Alec/Max have a gift.
Honest to God - it's right up there with my top 3 favourites. So for God's sake keep writing this story until Squall at least graduates from college. Sigh...now I can go to sleep and dream of being Mrs Alec McDowel... pregnant... after heat induced sex with Mr No Underpants Under His Chinos.
| fangiosfriend chapter 18 . 4/13/2010
So glad you got over your smut aversion. That was bloody funny and sexy. Don;t want this story to end...
| fangiosfriend chapter 16 . 4/13/2010
You cheeky fanfic writer you! Here I thought you'd coyly skipped over the steamy side when in fact, you rewarded your loyal readers with one helluva M rated chapter. Thankyou!