Reviews for Unforgotten
Helen40033 chapter 4 . 6/20/2014
Guest chapter 4 . 6/10/2014
The chapters are too short and nothing poignant really happens. It seems like the story will be unnecessarily drawn out. The idea is good though.
MYK-ON chapter 4 . 6/10/2014
nicely done.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/10/2014
I like it but knowing she's going to experience heartbreak soon is a bummer... Update as soon as ya can!
kika04 chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
So good cant wait for more
in your dreams as well chapter 3 . 9/22/2013
Hey it sounds good so far I just hope you make the chapters longer
Hello Nessa chapter 2 . 4/18/2007
Aw. Lyna this is totally sweet! I really loved this story! You portrayed both Hinata and Naruto so well! I love these two, but just like you I would defidently put Sasuke with Hinata if I owned them muahahahaha! Please update soon when you have time ;) *Going into Vanessa' favs!*
GaaraHinata4EVER chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
This is so beautiful! Please continue this! Terrific job!
harvestmooneve chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
continue, it's kind of hard to review right now, but it has good imagery.
MonKiki chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
can sakura be a slut!
DarkMasterStarr chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
*Shoots Naruto with a shotgun*

I can't belive you, goin' continue,miss or mister Li09
NocturneD chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
*Kicks Naruto in the nuts*

trust me, he deserves it...