Reviews for Death Comes Too Late
Drow Elf chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
No wonder dear Artemis is so messed up, if he is taken from his mother and forced to make his way in a world that is...well, is like THAT.

Once again, admirable word-work and imagery.

Salaam,

Drow Elf

Xal dos zexen'uma wun l' elamshinae d' Lloth!
Ariel D chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
Like I said when I reviewed the other poem, it's hard for me comment. But I think this is a fittingly brutal description: "[blood] spills out of people like a sack which has been slashed open."