Reviews for Machines
Drow Elf chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
My logic has failed me, I'm afraid. I'm not sure what this poem is trying to say. My best guess is that Artemis suddenly realizes that he is tired of reaping lives, and would instead like to bring hope and happiness, i.e. a bucket of water.

Please correct me if I am wrong.

Wonderful emotions if anything!


Drow Elf
Ariel D chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
I find it difficult to review poetry, frankly. But I can say that I really liked the opening lines, especially "I watch a scythe ruthlessly harvest grain./It does not look so different from me."