Reviews for Close Up
Deleted717 chapter 15 . 12/27/2016
Hah! I love this. Poor Jen.
Deleted717 chapter 8 . 12/26/2016
Lovely. I wish I could see more of their adult world like this.
Deleted717 chapter 2 . 12/26/2016
Cute! Overprotective!Ryo is just adorkable!
Deleted717 chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
Oh, so lovely! Captures Ruki's mindset perfectly.
Laudi14 chapter 37 . 7/30/2014
OMG you should keep updating this I really love it, it's really funny specialt te purge stories I love those!
LiiMakino chapter 12 . 3/31/2011
I also think of skiing when i think of Ruki. I guess is because the Ice Queen thing. :D
SnowLion no Miko chapter 37 . 1/16/2011
I looooove this fic. I think this is a great story you're writing. You just portray Ruki and Ryo wonderfully. Keep up the awesome work!
likeliquidsunshine chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Hello liahime! You know, I searched through all the stories on Ryuki and came to the conclusion that you are the best writer for this fandom. ever. hands down. and just so you know, I LOVEEE YOUR WRITING TO PIECES. please please please please continue writing about them. PLEASE. Thanks so much for sharing!
minako chapter 26 . 2/28/2009
that was lovely.


chou gives 10 points chapter 27 . 2/20/2009
to liahime

house of ravenclaw

for this.

i like your vulnerable!ruki.

and i can identify with the homesickness.

i think you may be straying into ooc

but then again, you might be uncovering a personality. :]
chou chapter 26 . 2/20/2009
another achingly terrible piece.

you send me from lol to T_T you know that?

I love your mr. selfish ryou.

mr. sad ryou

(and mr. dead ryou, but that's a different chapter. XD)

I liked the italics

and love the () things. the name escapes me.

a bit of a cliche on that ending, but I think it's ok.

chou again chapter 22 . 2/20/2009
sorry, had to squee to you about this.

“Professor? I don’t think-“

“No,” he says, almost fondly, “you don’t, you never did in my class."


cracked up


-annoyingly yours, chou.
chou of hufflepuffff chapter 22 . 2/20/2009
likes your harry potter-meets-ryuki!

I like Ryou in Charms. Cute, cute.

And I spy a pokemon too! CARNIVINE. :D

Ruki and Sibyl would HATE EACH OTHER'S GUTS.


and I can imagine Ryou abusing his announcer powers.

and all the girls turning up just to listen to him. XD



lily evans and james potter

they totally could be like that.
chou chapter 18 . 2/20/2009
(Takato sighs, and begins to regret taking the role of Sympathetic Friend when all he wanted to do was play Ultra Sidewalk Fighter 4. Go on, he sighs.)

This made it.

Again, I love your Takato.

I love your side characters almost as much as I love the ryuki.
chou chapter 29 . 2/20/2009
now this is my favorite.

it's raw and beautiful and I read it about oh, one hundred times.

I think if I picked out my favorite lines, I might as well highlight the whole dang thing.

but here we go.

without shadows, how do you know light?


The whole dragon-dinosaur(?) thing. GORGEOUS.

and ryou as a coward- I like that spin on mr. hero-boy.


(You have seen death and did not roar. You turned around, thanked it very politely for its time and left as quickly as you could.)

I cracked up.

and have I mentioned? I adore your jen. ADORE. if you ever stop writing ryuki, please write jen.


I love how you used her looks and her connection with her mom and tied it in with how flashy a fox coat is.


so sad. I like the way you showed Jeri's aftershock.

And mentioned her bartending. :]

MR. COURAGE (the cowardly dog XD)

goodness, I love your takato too. this is the first appearance that i've seen- but then again, i've been skipping around. but I like this. you make him into a hero.

achingly sad and beautiful.
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