Reviews for The Uzumaki Clan (ORG)
NarutoKyubiUzumaki7426 chapter 9 . 3/20/2014
I wanted to add void to the poll void in naruto would be the domain of yami and is a completely neutral so abilities I could think of would be chakra absorption with a lint of course it would need to be trained but also able to create a distorted space in theory it would have the effect of minatos hirashin but different well it's just an idea until next chapter ja ne
Killeraction49 chapter 9 . 10/30/2011
I was wondering when you would update next please pm me i would really like for you to continue the story.
NarutoNamikaze1 chapter 9 . 9/15/2011
Continues this fucking story first! Finish the first candy bar before yOu start on a new one!
LunarCatNinja chapter 9 . 7/27/2011
Wow, this is a pretty unique story, as I've never read anything like it, so AWESOME job! W
blasterdog chapter 9 . 5/24/2011
fic is awesome
angelusjmw chapter 7 . 4/20/2010
give him mokuton but upgrade it to be able to manpulate all plants: flowers, trees, grasses, etc... and not just trees.

give him water fire earth light and darkness too but later

while lighting and mokuton earlier
warfreak82 chapter 9 . 12/1/2009
hey really cool chapter and story so keep up the good work ")
touShi0033 chapter 6 . 8/26/2009
uhm...

darkness, it would be a nice complement for his death element

gravity element...

nice story hope you'll get to finish it...
Azulish chapter 9 . 5/13/2009
People may not be reading this as much but its still an amazing story... I wish you'd continue it :/
Trebius chapter 9 . 3/31/2009
I like the story for the most part but I personally don't like this kyuubi very much. He more annoying than anything else.
totalsolution chapter 9 . 1/30/2009
really nice story!

but by the way: WHY THE HELL ARENT YOU UPDATING?

come on you cant be so mean to just let a story like this one fall. that would be aweful. besides you dint even begin to add the last element in there. so: waiting for updates!

oh yoeah: im full for chaos and lightning
deathmastas5000000000000000000 chapter 9 . 8/23/2008
cool stroy hope u update it soon
blackhawk293 chapter 9 . 7/10/2008
i say lighting and water so he can shoot a ball of water at the enemy and add a little electricity to paralyze his opponent. then he can cut off his head painlessly. XD
creepingshadow chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
cool
soulblade chapter 9 . 6/15/2008
i think he should find an old experiment of an evil creature that stole the best parts of the bone, sharingan, byakugan, uzamaki and mokuton bloodlines without the drawbacks but he must master each one one at a time oh and you can use this as a base for another story or an addition to this one
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