Reviews for Hearts Forbidden
Evil Bra chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Sorry. This story did not make my heart melt at times. If you're going to brag about your own story you might want to make sure it doesn't suck.
yo chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
u no wat ucould do to make this story better n a happy ending for everyone cuz of wat they were fighting for they won but then lose in the end but u could have another chapter n have it that they use the dragonballs to wish goten back after all it is only fair for wat they bin through

x

consider it lots more ppl luv happy endings than sad ones cuz of the nature of everything!
samantha chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
AND ANOTHER THING THE THING THEY WERE FIGHTING FOR THEY WON THAT IN THE END BUT NEVER GOT TO EXPERIENCE IT ALL BECAUSE U KILLED GOTEN THATS JUST SO SO GR CNT EVEN DESCRIBE IT!
samantha chapter 13 . 9/16/2007
HOW COULD U HOW COULD U KILL GOTEN IM SO UPSET AT THAT THAT IM CRYING HOW COULD U THEY LOVED EACH OTHER N U KILLED HIM OFF SO THEY COULDNT BE TOGETHER WAT IS GOING ON IN UR MIND Y Y DID U DO THAT NOW EVERYTIME I THINK BOUT IT IM GOING GET RELI UPSET N THINK Y N HOW N HOW HORRIBLE IT IS N IM NOT LYING THINGS LIKE THAT HAPPEN TO ME U NO BOUT HOW I THINK BOUT THINGS NOW THINK THINK AT HOW COULD U N TELL ME CUZ IM RELI INTRESETED IN HOW N Y IM EYES R HURTING FROM HOW MUCH IM CRYING N U NO WAT I KEEP READING THE LAST 3 PARAGRAPHS TRYING TO C IF THEY WOULD CHANGE TRYING TO C IF WAT I READ WAS IN MY MIND N NOT WAT I COULD C ON THE SCREEN I MEAN THEY COULD OF LIVED ON TOGETHER U COULD MAKE THE STORY LONGER PLZ TELL ME Y
Musette Fujiwara chapter 13 . 9/6/2007
Awesome...

I lovd it how it end with a not so happy ending...
Musette Fujiwara chapter 11 . 6/22/2007
wow...

awesome...

so she is being picked up by her father allie...

all hell broke loose... what will she do next?

and her parents did they managed to survive?
Musette Fujiwara chapter 10 . 4/2/2007
Wow...

So they are going back to planet Vegeta...

How will they be welcomed?

And happened to Trunks?
Fangirl44 chapter 8 . 2/14/2007
I hope they are ok
LunaBela chapter 3 . 2/12/2007
OMG! I am very much aware of the fact that I had not reviewed this story! And I give you my sincerest apologies! I really did think that I had actually reviewedthis fic! Once again, sorry!

Now, about this chappy: Aww, poor Bulla! Vegita can be such an ass at times!

Well, I would say more, but appearently I still need to catch up! So, onto chappy 4!

LunaBela
Fangirl44 chapter 6 . 1/17/2007
you finally updated Yeah!

poor Goten and Bulla

update this story soon
Eagle67 chapter 5 . 1/17/2007
i like the story im new to this and its not allowing me to write anything yet but i hope my stories are as good as yours you're a good writer i hope to finish reading this story
Fangirl44 chapter 5 . 12/22/2006
Update this story soon

i hope they are ok
Fangirl44 chapter 4 . 12/18/2006
update this story soon can'twait to read what happens
LunaBela chapter 2 . 11/23/2006
Wait, i'm so very confused. Are you going to end it here, in this part of the chappy, so you could start the next chappy where this one left off? Or are you just going to stop writing, period? . . . Yeah, you don't really have to answer that! I doubt I made any sence! AH, poor hottie Goten! he doesn't deserve this! . . . oh yeah, and about Vegeta, I really didn't think that he was that rude. I mean, this is how he normally is in the series, rude, but always hot! Well, please keep upi the good work, and UPDATE soon! Please!

LunaBela
LunaBela chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
Hey! I just found your fic today. Well, let me say that I really am liking where this fic is headed! There are a few grammatical errors, but other than that, very good first attempt. As for me, on to chappy 2!

LunaBela
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