Reviews for Face in the Mirror
Dudtheman chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
crazy i loved it!
Demon King Piccolo chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
I admit, I was significantly creeped out. All the more impressive considering I read Haruka/Keitaro stories in the past without minding it in the least, but I guess a grandmother is just too large of an age difference. It also didn't help that I continuously imagined her original appearance once it was revealed who she is.

Either way, thanks for the good read!
Manakel chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Quand j'ai découvert la vérité sur "Sayuri", j'ai trouvé ça bizarre, mais j'ai vraiment aimé cette histoire, après tout, étrange n'ai pas synonyme de mauvais, et j'aime beaucoup ce qui sort des sentiers battues. Enfin tout ça pour dire, bravo!
NAJ P. Jackson chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
This is really a disturbing fic LOL
Aoirann chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Man Keitaro just can't catch a break in any of your stories now can he? Great story thou.
0208 chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
nice story man but THAT was shock for me!
Mike chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Wow! I thought at first Sayuri was Keitaro & Naru's daughter from the future...

But his grandma that was quite a twist and the story is excellent, I would love to see it continue but stopping here works very well.
Demonkid chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
incestuous... interesting story though.
brindani chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
This wasn't really a surprise. Not because I have some superior ability to decipher mystery, nope the first time I tried to read this I thought she was his daughter from the future. I cheated and checked the other reviews. Anyway, this is a good piece though the pairing is rather unsavory. Something that will be coming up very soon is the very reason such pairings are unsavory, genetics. That poor baby...

brindani
demonicchild chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
oh god..no matter how romantic this fic is i can't stop thinking about that disturbing line..."you fucked you only grandson"..crap..keeps repeating and repeating in my mind!...i think i need to lie down...O_O
Mordamir chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
Well, I sure didn't see this coming like this! I mean, I was thinking that Sayuri would be Keitaro's and Naru's daughter from the future or anything of the sort...

Very nice and sweet fic. A little rushed at her final decision, but good nonetheless.

Nice job.
Kamen Rider Eclipse chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
Excellent, truly excellent...I, much like several others was expecting it to be his daughter, by the end of the story I couldn't contain my laughter.

I tip my hat to you.
Eson chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
I thought it was a future thing..., like Sayuri was Keitaro/Naru's daughter and she came back to save their relationship.

Now, wtf? Clever but thats just plain weird...

Didn't expect her to find what Juan Ponce de Leon never found.
Azndrifter25 chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
No matter how many times I've read this mysterious story, I always relate this story to the song, Ghost of you and me by BBMAK. Even though it's way off If I compare your story to the song I can try to relate to that after reading it more than 10 times.
beege chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
I see this story as a mark of how your writing has improved over time, which is saying something given that you weren't bad to start with. However, your more recent work (particularly Blizzard, which I rate as one of the few really good Love Hina darkfics around) has shown greater subtlety and complexity to go with a writing style that was always good. Face in the Mirror is another good example of this progress - I don't think anyone reading this for the first time could pick the exact nature of the twist, although I had some idea of where you were going. Given my own writing history I'm probably biased in favour of this story, but regardless I consider it your best work yet.

The closest thing I have to a criticism is that the final scene *might* have more impact if there was more of a buildup to it instead of just being dropped in as a stand-alone moment.
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