Reviews for Everyone’s a Critic
Loner Kid chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
This fic has load of potential! I can't wait to see more Ino and Dei interaction.
One question tho, does Ino know about the Akatsuki?
PS: It would be fun to see Dei chase Ino into Leaf just to show her an art xDD
Hilda12rocks chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
please continue! it's a really nice story :)
eenayde chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
CONTINUE IT! It sounds really interesting! Please keep on going.
Eldeweiss chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Awesome story
would be interesting to see how this would turn out
BoywhoCried chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Alexia chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
you should comtinue! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I like this...Zhor approves. -Zhor
Taeryfai chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
CONTINUE... *lots of love from the future X *
Yuti-Chan chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
This is awesome, please please update :D
Waifine chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
It's been an age since you updated, but yes! Yes you should! The story's really great, and you portrayed the characters wonderfully. You really presented a scenario in which Ino and Deidara might have started something XD. Hate at first sight.
DuQaine chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Continue please!

I loved the humor!

Two thumbs up! XD
Janus Darko chapter 1 . 1/8/2008

It's just too funny to see Deidara actually having a panic attack about getting rusty in his art.

No wonder the Sand shinobi thought those spiders looked weird...they probably had four legs for something.
evi chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
really, really cute. especially Deidara.

"...oh god, was he getting RUSTY?"


i think it's fine as a one-shot, but you could continue it as well.
super-rat chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
AdequateNerd chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
HAHA! Rusty! THAT REALLY MADE ME LAUGH! Oh god... I don't know how you're going to continue, but I know it'll be good!
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