|Reviews for Would you love a monster woman|
| Exodia513 chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
While there were like 10-15 typos and missing words, it was still readable. Aside from that i really enjoyed reading this. I liked the premise of it but i don't quite like the epilogue. I just don't like how Hinata's dad/clan dealt with it. I don't think the clan would kick her out or that her father would go to naruto for help, but that's more of a personality/politics type problem that doesn't really need to be covered in a one-shot lemon fic.
So overall, 9.5/10 :)
| Veldrisk chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Excellent One-shot. I would love to see this continued as a full story but it is also good as is.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
I liked it and it was pretty good
| Major Session chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Wow, another great piece of work by you. I'm not so sure about the fox features as I'm not the greatest furry fan but the hey, it made for a good read and original idea.
| Werejaguar of Halloween Town chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
I say you do a fic where they both get fox-ed.
| Zero-metallix chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
i dont review very often but i quite enjoyed this one shot, i'd love to find more fan-fics with simuler plots but it doesnt seam to come up much
| Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
i love it
| Gravity The Wizard chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
| PhantasmagoricBlade chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
| Ikasury chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Oohh-hoo-hoo-hoo-hoo *Perverted giggle/squeel* hehehehehe, please do write more, i definitely like hina-chan all foxed out, though i think naru should go all foxy with her and we'd have a pair of horny, animalistic kitsunes, ne? *maniacal hand-gestures* hehehehe wouldn't that be great *has widest most perverted wolfish grin known to man* heheheehehehehee i definitely am gonna read that last one you got, especially if there's more foxy bits of the two of them, hehehehe bacon... sorry but i seriously need to get my fox now, this stuff is getting me all excited and i should pay attention to my own fox once in a while *rubs hands together with evil wolfy grin* hehehehehehehehee, bacon!
till next *perverted grin* Sayounara, Stunt-sama
*stalks off to find a certain blue fox*
| random passerby chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
I liked your story alot but i think lemons aren't allowed on
I would suggest either editing your story or moving your story to a new site (the only one i can think of is
I won't report you for this but I suggest you at least make sure you have a copy on your computer as a backup in case you're reported.
| Crimson Lion chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
good story i think you should create one that combines these two maybe call it the love of two monsters i dont know just doesnt seem right that one is turned into a kitsune while the other isnt
| Chaos Angel1235 chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
hey great story
| Morriganna chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
You know, you should write one where they BOTH become monsters :-).
| finalfantasy2012 chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
LOVE THE BACON JOKE! funny as hell! yeah there was a lot of spelling mistakes. really good story tho!