Reviews for One Step |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT UPDATE SOON |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! That's so cute~! It's like Momoshiro is WAITING for Ryoma to come home. (though I really don't like that pairing... _) Oh! Kevin and Ryoma seem really close now... Is there going to be yaoi? I'm just wondering 'cause I don't care either way as long as it's literate. x3 So... Update as soon as you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice begining so far! im going to review you later because im in sucha bad mood and not in the mood to type good reviews, so for now, i like it so far. please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() kyya i cant wait to read more! especially if this is MomoRyo! update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Love the story idea and it is good so far. Ryoma seems a little OOC but I like it anyways! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting premise. I like it and am putting you on my author alerts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Promising start, though you should take more care of your grammar, you change tenses frequently ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice, and rather funny. I especially liked the part where Ryoma linked how everything was stupid, even his dad. Hope to see an update soon. By the way, Is this MomoRyo or RyoKevin? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon, I'm really curious about what will happen afterwards. _ |