Reviews for One Step
Gakuen-Tenshi201 chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
I LOVE IT UPDATE SOON
Winter's Light chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Aww! That's so cute~! It's like Momoshiro is WAITING for Ryoma to come home. (though I really don't like that pairing... _) Oh! Kevin and Ryoma seem really close now... Is there going to be yaoi? I'm just wondering 'cause I don't care either way as long as it's literate. x3

So... Update as soon as you can!
merissala chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
nice begining so far! im going to review you later because im in sucha bad mood and not in the mood to type good reviews, so for now, i like it so far. please continue
KagomeGirl021 chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
kyya i cant wait to read more! especially if this is MomoRyo! update again soon!
Grace brings Hope chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
YAY! Love the story idea and it is good so far. Ryoma seems a little OOC but I like it anyways!
Rosadina chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Interesting premise. I like it and am putting you on my author alerts.
nlblake chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Promising start, though you should take more care of your grammar, you change tenses frequently ;)
Gwynhafra chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Very nice, and rather funny. I especially liked the part where Ryoma linked how everything was stupid, even his dad.

Hope to see an update soon. By the way, Is this MomoRyo or RyoKevin?
xxscantyxx chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Please update soon, I'm really curious about what will happen afterwards. _
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