| Reviews for A Forked Road |
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   Deleted272929367383 chapter 7 . 2/4/2012 i love this chapy the longer the better they ar. update soon sometime this week maybe? |
| Deleted272929367383 chapter 2 . 2/4/2012 "he stepped on the wurmple not feeling any guilt" rotten son of a beach |
| luminodrake chapter 7 . 12/7/2006 The calling out of another Pokemon contrary to what Roy announced was quite the awesome. I hereby applaud. |
| pek chapter 7 . 12/7/2006 heh heh. is that magma? anyway, this fanfic is MUCH better than your harry potter one. you're liberally making use of the setting and using original characters - so far as i can tell you've remained loyal to what the original series set down, and the action is pretty exciting. keep it up! |
| Manyula chapter 7 . 12/6/2006 hi! guess who matt. lol. anyway, not to be nitpicky here, but i still don't think kabutops ought to have gone down like that. i mean, kabu resists normal. and he's in no way "frail". 75 base att up against base 105 def AND a resistance is a bit weird. i guess i'm just being nitpicky though. _ i never did like anime style battling gone overboard. but other than that nice research! most of the other battles are believable enough. |
| Hawkeye116 chapter 7 . 12/6/2006 Once again, good chapter-it's neat to see not just Roy has character depth, but that other minor characters such as Trevor are flawed as well. I dunno why, but I have this lingering suspicion that we'll be seeing Trevor again. Who knows? Nice job! Keep it going. |
| Capybara 773 chapter 7 . 12/6/2006 Charmeleon came off victorious (sort of) once again, eh? Good stuff! I'm glad Nerdboy got kicked: not keeping losing Pokemon, he should be ashamed. Now next chapter: 'Roy against Team Aqua'; 'Roy beats everyone'; or even 'Roy helps repair the Arena after Sandslash's Earthquake'! Jokes. Can't wait till next chapter! Sayonara! Capybara 773 |
| Capybara 773 chapter 6 . 12/1/2006 Yay! Lots of flooding and death! Good fun. Roy's Charmeleon was kick-ass too. Gotta appreciate those sorts of Charmeleon. Update soon! Sayonara! Capybara 773 |
| Hawkeye116 chapter 6 . 12/1/2006 Very good writing, as per usual. A captivating chapter; I liked the Pokemon battle between Roy and Bowyer. My one criticism is that you should add line breaks between scene changes; it gets a bit confusing when the scene randomly changes from one place to another. |
| ImportantStoryFrog chapter 1 . 11/25/2006 Holy crap, I freaking love it. It's absolutely amazing, and if anyone tries to tell you that it isn't, tell them to shove it. Now hurry up and add more! |
| Capybara 773 chapter 5 . 11/22/2006 Nice chapter! I liked the little bit about the evo-stone dealer, and how Roy is starting to feel a bit guilty about changing his Pikachu. Heh, he gets jealous cos' some else has more Pokemon than him. So what are Team Aqua planning? Could it have anything to do with Mr. G? Sayonara! Capybara 773 PS. Update soon! |
| Hawkeye116 chapter 5 . 11/22/2006 I see; the beginning of the downfall. Nice use of foreshadowing and such. Can't wait to read more. |
| Capybara 773 chapter 4 . 11/19/2006 Nice chapter! Don't worry if you're not so good at describing battles. Everyone has good points and bad points. I was always bad at romance, but pretty good at action. Your story has plenty of other good points, anyway. Such as treating Pokemon more like animals (our hero would probably see them as such anyway, with the stepping on Wurples). I always prefer Pokemon stories where the Pokemon subject is much darker and nastier. Update soon! Sayonara! Capybara 773 |
| luminodrake chapter 4 . 11/19/2006 Awesome fic so far. That reminds me, I've been slacking off for some time now. :# You shall continue! Rawr. |
| YeLlOwLiZaRd chapter 4 . 11/18/2006 Go Louie! That's my dog's name-yeah! I hope that Louie at least gives Roy a run for his money, or maybe causes him to break a sweat, right? |