Reviews for The Diner
nicklebackfan chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
i loved
Sammie chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
You are very good! I like the way you write and you know how Sam and Dean think, which some writers have problems with. Keep up the good work.
E. Clay chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
*laughing* I really enjoyed this. You had Sam and Dean's banter down perfectly. I especially enjoyed Dean talking while breathing through his mouth, how you changed the dialog. It was very cute, and I loved Sam spotting the window in the restroom and asking Dean if he was thinking what he was thinking and Dean not getting that Sam was thinking about escaping, and Sam smacking him, nice role reversal there. Poor guys, I think they more than paid for their meal, and that Mildred chick what a bitch, as Dean would say. Great job on this story. I'm adding it to my favorites. Thanks for posting.