Reviews for The Order of Things
Chatterpie chapter 11 . 11/16/2006
I love this story. It's beautiful how you managed to introduce a new character seamlessly. It jumps ahead a lot, but it's good cause I get bored easily with long-winded stories. I'm glad to see you're not fixated on Ororon and Chiaki, but not ignoring them either, and you're making thello happy (for the moment). It's all good. Keep doing what you're doing!