|Reviews for Final Exam|
| Traca chapter 2 . 10/3
My friend showed me this whole fic (Pits this one). I have stayed up way too late, pushed off homework, and used this to procrastinate. All of which is entirely my fault but I just want to drive home the point that the SECOND you get emotionally involved with this story, it grabs you by the scruff of the neck and pounds you literally into next week, and all you can say is "Ow."
I adore this story and I applaud you for not ending it with as much death as you could (WHY DID YOU KILL OFF MICA WHYYY), and my gosh your writing style is just amazing! And though I would have killed to see Specter replaced with Dani (who had been thrown in the Pits way earlier and gone mad from the complete abandonment of everyone, because seriously she disappeared after two episodes in the series and everyone just forgets her), I really REALLY loved the entire story start to finish!
Now I'm going to go imagine Danny becoming a happy little gardener/author and living a happy life free of worries or nightmares or guilt because this little cinnamon bun has gone through TOO MUCH!
-thank you again for writing this! It is beautiful.
| PJforever chapter 2 . 8/23
This is one of the best stories I've ever read, published and fanfiction alike. It was deep and emotional, and altogether made me cry. I read it over and over again before I realized it was almost 3 am and I've been reading this story for 2 hours. I absolutely loved this story. You're a fantastic writer.
| neeniya chapter 2 . 8/17
I am in complete awe. From start (Pits) to finish, this was amazing. You truly do have a talent for story telling (or editing, as you put it). Everything was so perfectly put into place, even when you doubted your actions (based off your comments in Pits). I am in a sort of dazed stupor now that it's over. I wish there was more haha.
| ShadowPillow chapter 2 . 7/13
Why was it this second part that got me, rather than the first? Gah T.T
| May-Rene chapter 2 . 6/24
I think I will read pits. Danny deserves his story to be told.
Congratulations... The catharsis is overwhelming right now. I wonder if this will end up in my dreams since I'll be going to sleep soon or if I'll be able to fall sleep without just thinking on this.
| May-Rene chapter 1 . 6/24
Wow. I was really wanting to read pits (kinds still do) but the darkness in this first chapter is giving me second thoughts.
You did a good job packing in the emotion.
| Apollo Jones chapter 2 . 6/5
That was beautiful. I am experiencing the same dilemma as Mr. Lancer, there is no way to properly describe this, it is amazing and shouldn't be possible, but here it is. Great job.
| Hermione Jean Burton xxx chapter 2 . 4/22
Lost in thought until I heard Star Wars starting up in my cousins room and startled me. Excellent and very angsty, Just what I was kind of expecting :D
| demimusa chapter 2 . 4/11
I'm... speechless. I'm shaking, pulling on my hair. That was extraordinary. I don't know what to say; I'm stunned. I guess... I'll go and read Pits now
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/11
Amazing made me cry. Good work :)
| fictiongirl1230 chapter 2 . 11/27/2014
I loved it. I really liked this fic and i was dying to reed the sequel to Pits, so, yeah. I like your writting and, only for ypu to know, most of your stories.
| EnderDragon21 chapter 2 . 11/10/2014
I loved this story so much. It's just amazing. I cannot describe how good this is. and I'm glad I read this. I'm going to read your prequel, and then DizzlyPuzzled's sequal, Dark Minutes. Goodbye.
| Tessers2899 chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
You have to finish this story but in a way u can't finish it is the end but a new beginning and I bet some people are already making the ending but u have to because this is your story and u can decide if u want to finish or not but I want u so badly to finish it
| silver7612 chapter 2 . 9/22/2014
This is awesome. It was the first Danny Phantom fanfic I'd read and I loved it.
| Ninja Phantom chapter 2 . 8/31/2014
Oh my gosh. This brought me to tears. In both chapters but mostly the second. I can't find the right words to say about it. It was probably the best thing I have read in a long time