|Reviews for To Walk A Mile|
| Zhor chapter 6 . 7/25/2013
Good story, but you cut it off right when the conflict was building up. No resolution...
| RikaNipah chapter 6 . 9/23/2009
Man, this should be continued. It's so intresting!
| Cap'n Chryssalid chapter 6 . 7/30/2009
I remember reading this a while back, when it was a little shorter. Still excellent, still enjoyable, with a very believable look into Taro's character that you don't often see in fics. Dunno when or if I'll be updated again, but it is definitely worth tagging with a Fav and an alert.
| LoyalSark chapter 6 . 5/17/2009
Excellent story! Well written, with spot-on characterizations. Liked the slowly building friendship and understanding between Ranma and Tarou. Curious to see what changes to the dynamics will come from having Ryouga added to the mix. I was also intrigued by your exploration of how the instincts intrinsic to the curse-forms are carried over to their normal states. I see it's been over two years since this has been updated, but I'll keep my fingers crossed and hope that you'll be able to finish it one day. :) I'm adding this to my story alerts. :)
| tigerdreams chapter 6 . 7/19/2007
Cliffhanger? I hope you're planning on updating again soon! This story is really well-written; the characterization is dead-on accurate, and the backstory you've given Tarou fits well with his personality, and goes a long way toward explaining why he's such a jerk (not that that excuses him, mind you). Poor Ryoga... I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| Blissful Archangel chapter 6 . 4/30/2007
I just love how well written this is. The way you portray the characters are well done, the characters are totally themselves (...does that make sense?). I also love the fact that Tarou is also apart of the story, you don't really see him that often in Ranma fan fics.
The idea is also very original, so that's pretty cool. Anyway, hope you update with another lovely chapter soon.
| JSB chapter 2 . 4/7/2007
Alright...back on schedule. Review of chapter 2.
"Ranma's hunch was that Ryouga..." I would say change it to say "Ranma had a hunch that Ryouga..." This is because you have been using the past subjunctive a lot, and it flows better in my opinion.
"a quick check of the newspapers confirmed this", the "this" isn't really the right word to use, I'd say go with "confirmed his suspicions.
"In the end, he reason he gave" the first "he" he should be "the".
"She’d thump me if she knew that was me, he thought ruefully. The un-cute tomboy."
I'd put thoughts between two apostrophes, so it helps the reader understand that they aren't part of the narrative.
Other than those few things in the beginning, the rest was pretty well done, and there was nothing wrong. It'll probably be a while before I get back to this, sorry.
| JSB chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
Well, since you asked me to check everything over, thats what I'll do.
“Did you need me to take you to the dojo?" should be,
“Do you need me to take you to the dojo?" Very minor error.
Assuming that Ranma still has, less than adequate use of...Japanese, or English when we write about him, I'll ignore whatever he says wrong, since it's probably in his character to do that.
"A telegraph pole lay on its side"...I seriosly doubt Japan still has telegraphs, or telegrams. I think it should probably be Telephone pole.
Thats about it, but this chapter had been revised, so I expected that. Looking very interesting from here.
| Jashida chapter 5 . 1/31/2007
I've been reading this fic from the beginning and I am utterly impressed by it. Please keep up the writing.
| claymade chapter 5 . 1/31/2007
Awesome work, as usual. The Akane subplot seems to be providing some good tension and plot progression in the interim, as the boys are figuring out what they need to do to resolve the main issue. Looking forward to seeing how the threads all weave together!
| Tower of Babel chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
I'm coming back to read the rest of it later as I don't have time to engage in the story completely at present, but from what I've read: very intelligently done! I've saved you to my favourites list.
| Jashida chapter 4 . 12/28/2006
This is 0ne of the better Ranma fics out there and I love the introspective look into the characters. Keep writing.
| katan321 chapter 4 . 12/28/2006
Another great job!
| claymade chapter 4 . 12/27/2006
Awesome, awesome story concept, matched only by its execution. There's plenty of straight-up action/fighting-centric Ranma stories out there, but it's the rare one that can hang so much on character studies and still work. And as if that weren't enough, the action sequences, when they are there, are both interesting and exciting.
The three leads complement each other wonderfully, and the dynamics between them, as forced by the ingenious idea of the curse transfer, are excellent.
Can't wait to read more!
| cosplaythief chapter 4 . 12/27/2006
Have I ever told you how I enjoy this story? No probably not. If there was a law against reading and not reviewing I guess I would be long in jail by now. I have reasons though!
At any rate, it's rare to find a good Taro fanfic let alone one that gives him a background. I mean as much as I live Ranma, the series seem to lack a LOT of character development. I mean it's always add another random character and hope things will be more interesting.
All in all, I love it. You're turning me into a Taro fan, I can feel it. The main plot makes sense; Ranma needs to learn the pain of Ryouga's curse, Taro needs a background and Ryouga needs to learn that eventhough his curse is bad there's still worse. I just hope he lives through it.
Waiting for the next update,
Ryouga better not die!