Reviews for To End All Wars
gabe.d.clark.1997 chapter 1 . 6/28
Can't stand the first chapter. Sure, nerfing an overpowered side and empowering a weaker one to create equal stand for more interesting conflict isn't that bad from a writing standpoint... but you didn't do it to make them equal, you did it to make you're favorites sound more awesome while they somehow shove their superiors into the dirt. Rakatan Hyperdrives, while fast compared to hyperdrives from SW-KOTOR, were limited to planets with a potent enough force nexus thanks to their method of operation (The main reason that gravity can effect ships in hyperspace is because if they "dive" to deep into it [like hypergates do] they loose all points of reference, including on how to get out. Force sensitivity somewhat fixes that issue). Along with their primary strength being the Star Forge, which they only had one of along with it not actually having any real defense besides rapid ship production (you should have just swarmed them with drone fighters Malek, quicker to make in bulk and SW ships are famous for how weak they are to strike-craft tactics...). And it wasn't even that large (if you compare people to ship sections you walk through, then the full ships to the Star Forge's central section during The Battle for The Star Forge) compared to your average Forerunner construct (artificial planets bigger on the inside...). And then giving them access to multiple galaxies even though nothing in their lore says they had that capability, meanwhile putting down the side that actually could do it but simply didn't do it because it wasn't economical just tops the cringe flavored cake.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17
You are well aware this is NOT how the flood were created, yes?
Guest chapter 6 . 12/10/2016
First off 30km is slow for a spartan they do around 50-60km sprints and halo does slip space jumps not hyperspace slip space is traveling through something like a pocket deminiont where time is shortened a distance is smaller so one miles In slip space is equivalent to 100,000 to 100,000,000 miles in real space!
jc chapter 16 . 3/17/2016
wicked good fic
trninjakiller chapter 2 . 4/24/2015
Sorry but I wanted a chief in starwars verse not the other way around.
Axcel chapter 2 . 4/10/2015
Finally a smart Malak! One who realizes that he needs Revan to win the war against the Republic and the True Sith before he can risk trying to take Revan's place.

I had wondered at that in canon. Malak had struck me as someone who would have realized that instead of stabbing Revan in the back during a critical battle. He also struck me as someone who would want to prove himself the stronger by defeating Revan in a duel, not a surprise attack from a warship. I think he'd actually have contempt for suck a cowardly assassination.
keys of fate chapter 16 . 1/5/2015
OHHHH, so it's all up to Master Chief, and Revan now. :3
keys of fate chapter 15 . 1/5/2015
Hmm, so the Battle Droids are entering the fray eh. :3

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keys of fate chapter 14 . 1/5/2015
Wow, awesome Flood battle man. :D

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keys of fate chapter 13 . 1/5/2015
and so the Flood come in to kill them all. -_-

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keys of fate chapter 12 . 1/5/2015
Hmm, so this was just about The KOTOR people eh. I can't wait till the Flood come into action.

Anyway update soon.
keys of fate chapter 10 . 1/5/2015
Haha OHHHH, poor Bastila. XD

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keys of fate chapter 9 . 1/4/2015
Ha, and so they finally meet. :)

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keys of fate chapter 8 . 1/4/2015
So, Revan and Bastila finally meet, eh.

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keys of fate chapter 4 . 1/1/2015
And so we make it to the ground battle.

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