|Reviews for As Opposed To What Everyone Says|
| Arganaut chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
| Sammo909 chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
Good, very good. If this is the standard quality of your works then I think I'll have the check the rest out.
One thing though, I found a couple typos.
4th paragraph, "tot eh back most seat". Perhaps "to the rearmost seat"?
Later on, "she doesn't dare to breath". To 'breathe' is the action, a 'breath' is the object, for lack of a better word.
| olliebird113 chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
That was so totally cute! _