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PastelColoredRamblings chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
Oh, wow! That was so cute! I'm a big fan of NaruHina. They're my favorite characters. Good job!
Arganaut chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
Sammo909 chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
Good, very good. If this is the standard quality of your works then I think I'll have the check the rest out.

One thing though, I found a couple typos.

4th paragraph, "tot eh back most seat". Perhaps "to the rearmost seat"?

Later on, "she doesn't dare to breath". To 'breathe' is the action, a 'breath' is the object, for lack of a better word.
olliebird113 chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
That was so totally cute! _
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