|Reviews for sparkster (SNES ADVENTURE)|
| Wonderswan chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
Yeah, grammer and stuff needs to be touched up but otherwise I had a good laugh with this, keep on writing!
| spincutEdge6272 chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
Okay, I've reviewed one of your Sparkster fics before so you should know my problem with your fic. PLEASE CORRECT THE CAPITALIZATION, SPELLING AND GRAMMAR! Sorry, just that I'm very annoyed by the incorrect use of English. Well, please keep writing more chapters for this and the Level 6 and 7 fic you did. It's good so far but just correct the English, K?
| Jooles chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
I'm sure the story's fascinating and so on and so on but your grammar and spelling doesn't make it easy to read...Shape up...