Reviews for A Day
xmysteriousunknownx chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
oh my god that is so sweet and sad... :( i cried at the end...! keep it up! 3 ur stories
Angel-wing2 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
I read this second version. It still gave me the goosebumps! Awesome story! Very, very sad, but still awesome nonetheless. T_T
CynthionaX chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
OH SHIT GIRL!

that is the most sadest ff ive read so far...man... im crying like a frigguinish waterfall T.T!

poor sasuke kun, he didnt deserve this, anyway beside that im still crying, i liked it!

god im gonna need more napkins...what a way to die..GOD. snif

bye take care (wave)
Illya1997 chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Hmm...I'm preetty sure Sakura died from a technique that Tsunade taught her...i wonder what it is though...

Er...Sequel?
Yanik chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
“You made it, Sasuke-kun! Can you do it again everyday?”

Beautiful words. Actually I expected just another one angst story, but when I read this line, I realised that I was crying.
cherryblossomdream chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
wow i'm speechless that was amazing i dont even know what to say.

That last line it omg i'm starting again 'snif' it really made me cry.

The story was beautiful and i love it so much i cant aeven imagine how sasuke would have felt.
kawaiisasusaku chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Wow...just wow...I don't know what to really say...

The ending was so so SO sad and the last line: “You made it, Sasuke-kun! Can you do it again everyday?” just hit breaking point for me. I'm in tears. It started out like this fairytale, nice, sweet SasuSaku story and then the ending came around and shattered everything. Your simple style of writing was also great.

Tragic tales like this one can never bring a smile but it did it's job by bringing me sorrow. Sigh, why did she have to die there? I can't even imagine what Sasuke must have felt later...losing everything he loved once again...just when he thought he had something to be happy about, just when he thought he had a second chance at life...sigh...

Excellent!
Delicate Desires chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
I almost cried! That was so sad!
midnightRAIIN chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
Wow, this is amazing.

The last line made me cry so much ;_;
zetsuboukatt chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Ah.

Why?

this is so sad...she's not that stupid to do that!

You have very good writing techniques...

BUT! you didnt have to make this one so sad for me to cry over it...I liked your other ones...
Immortalfantasylover chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
I am crying right now.
Red Lips 'nd Cloudy Eyes chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Now it makes a little more sense to me. But it's still so sad! You made a lot of people cry...
feisu-chan chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
dammit, woman! i just finished reading 1002 and then you made me TT_TT again! stop playing with my emotions! i'm so angsty!
TeddyBearHugs chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Your story made me cry! It's so beautiful in a sad way...
Cherrysinger chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
That was very morbid.

“You made it, Sasuke-kun! Can you do it again everyday?”

Does not seem like something Sakura would write. Sounds like a joke.
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