Reviews for A Day
Just Lovely chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
I read the full version. Why did she not want Sasuke to see her like that? Why not spend your last moments with those you love, I hated how Sasuke seemed to be the only one who was kept in the dark, completely clueless and the one who suffered the most. It was so sad.

I really understood the last line but it was so mean... it was like she was rubbing it in his face that he would have to endure the rest of his life without her. It seemed a bit out of place but I really liked this version better, it gave a lot more information about Sakura's condition.

It was really tragic.
heckyeah-sasusaku-sorato chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
T-T I'm crying
Mystic Twirl chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
I love the story and it seriously made me cry. So beautiful.

I read this awhile back and i think i reviewed the incomplete version.

Recently I read this newly writen 'Maid-sama' fic and i noticed it kinda had the same concept. I hope you'll read it because this person might have stolen the idea.

Anon chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
That was so sad and beautiful at the same time. The last line was the best. You made it, Sasuke-kun! Can you do it again everyday?" T_T
Pineapple Lump chapter 1 . 6/29/2010

it was so sad!

but really good!
another.creative.lover chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
THAT'S SO SAD! TTATT I hate the last line... it's beautiful. :(

"Congratulations, Sasuke-kun! You made it! Now can you do it everyday?" (cries) That's so heartless... :( It makes me sad...
Candy Blossomhearts chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
This is so sad. I cried :'( Beautifully written. Loved it anyways :)
kusachi-chan chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
me: it's so deeply moving that it brought tears to my eyes and -

demon: she meant that it's very sad. just ignore her rant.

temper: (wails)

me: (still ranting)
forever - a i n e chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
EmeraldUchiha76 chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
i don't get what happened in the end. did sakrua die or not?
tamachon chapter 1 . 4/23/2010

So frickin sad and... beautiful...

First fic that ever made me shed tears not tear...
Yuki chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
That is SO not fair u made me cry for the second time the SAME story! But this one is better cus totally shows ur writing style.
kristy245 chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Please update! Cause you have to,.. your story wasn't marked completed, so you have to.. right? I do not want to believe the story ended this way.

I like it, your story reminds me of this other story I read, but it's a little different, check it out.

Marry Me by kunoichisakura-hime
gimmeabreakxD chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
oh gosh..

i actually cried.

i love it.

x-ticklemeblue chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
loved it.


cos I freakin' love your stories. seriously. :D

you are like my ROLE MODEL in the fanfiction: SasuSaku kingdom. :D



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