|Reviews for Becoming Brothers|
| Awesome Shadows chapter 3 . 11/16/2013
I know it's abandoned but the story is interesting! Has someone adopted it or anything? I would really love to find out what happened next.
| Theta-McBride chapter 3 . 8/5/2013
Aww. It's abandoned? Darn... :(
| ShutInBookWorm chapter 3 . 7/25/2013
I really enjoyed this story and it's predecessor I find it sad that you stoped writing it but am glaf I got to read what was there it was very interesting.
| DGfleetfox chapter 3 . 6/18/2013
I know you abandoned this story, but I still am leaving a comment. Tom is such a little b-tard sometimes, lol. Yeah yeah, his environment influenced a lot of that, but still, Harry grew up badly too and he's like awesome.
| Dy chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
Likelihood of picking this story up again is probably low, but it's a good story (and you're a month off active from a Final Fantasy tale). So, I want to hear how Harry integrates himself into pureblood society (at the kicking of Tom) and I want to see Tom well, alter his future on the basis of the options that he has been given (even if he still falls along a similar path). Tom's voice and Harry's are spot-on. And their interactions are fun to read. I think you could easily write from the things you've foreshadowed: the manor reopening, the NEWTs, Grindewald's interest in Harry, Harry's potential marriage partners, etc. and the rest would fall into play.
| Crimson chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
I came across this fan fiction this morning and read it absolutely none stop. Thank you for all your hard work and I would very much like to shout in despair upon seeing this not completed... It has been 6 years so I doubt that you will pick it up again, but if was a very nice read.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 3 . 11/29/2012
| Iellmy chapter 3 . 8/23/2012
emm...I saw the "abandoned" warning, but I still want to read this sequel.
| MaiWishes chapter 3 . 8/7/2012
AUGH nooo its over already :( I really wanted to see how you progressed with their relationship. Did you give up because the blood/relatives thing is getting out of hand and you lost 'steam'? I could care less if that mistake makes sense or not, just as long as we get more Harry and Tom :(
Hopefully you get back into the spirit of HP someday
| Rubberduck697 chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Thank you so much for sharing! Wondefully written!
| Upon a Pale Horse chapter 3 . 2/19/2012
This story is fascinating. I realize that you abandoned it years ago, but still, I do hope that you pick it up again at some point.
There are a few Harry adopts Tom story's out there, but so far as I know, none where Tom is already at Hogwarts and starting down his dark path already.
| Coby chapter 3 . 2/13/2012
Wouldn't it make more sense for Tom's father to be Harry's mother's brother? That way Tom could tell people about his mother and therefore his link to Slytherin.
| Hesunohana chapter 3 . 1/18/2012
MY GOD ! that was so extraordinary ! I so sorry you didn't finish this one. the prequel was great. and this beginning was so interesting too.
| ShadowOfNight-9 chapter 3 . 1/2/2012
oooh noes! :0
now i'm really sad, that you abandoned this fic...
is there nothing to get you around to end this story?
no? to bad... i am really sad (
| Hullo chapter 3 . 12/8/2011
I wish you would update this story because I find it wonderful but I understand if it's over :S
Simply put, I think this is spectacular writing (bother this and the prequel) and the characterizations and storyline are superb.