Well, this is a nice little drabble. :) I like how you describe everything so vaguely, like when Roxas really doesn't quite remember what the dream was about. That's what often happens when people dream. You get asked "What kind of a dream did you have?" And the answer is something like "There were bunnies, chainsaws, barns, cars..."

I love the title. Hips and Hearts. That'd make an awesome name for Axel's band.

And let me tell you, Kingdom Hearts II would've been even better with dreams like that.

Aw! That was good! I'm not a major AkuRoku fangirl, but that was a really nice piece! Kudos to you!

~Amunet 8D

; While my fans in the Yugioh section wonder "When is that girl going to update her fic?", I review this! (And try not to get killed while doing it!)

I loved it! Well, it's my OTP, but I love it for other reasons too! It's short, but sweet, and that last sentence, "It was a doomed memory, never to come clearly to light." To me, that not only summarizes the fic, but the pairing in general! ...Except it's a pairing, not a memory, but you get the idea! You wrote it! Good work!

Me likey! Me want to read more! (I should really stop drinking coffee.)

~CursedAngel~

Is this a drabble, or do you plan to continue it? Beautiful either way. You wrote it very well. _

Whee! To Roxas and dreams!

so kawai XD