|Reviews for The Pitfalls of Seduction|
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/10/2013
we've got the hook and the line, where's the sinker?! love this, can't wait for more!
| Caramelized chapter 3 . 2/3/2013
the dirty mind line though.
i cracked and my roommate is sleeping.
but amazing job on that xD.
I really hope you update sometime! I wanna see how this turns out, especially with those pictures in mind :P
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/16/2012
LOL this chapter was just fantastic! naruto and shikamaru are hilarious, the girls are hilarious, YOU are hilarious. everyone's character was perf. i really hope you come back to this, please update soon, i would love to see how the seduction works out! shikaino woot :D
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
oh my goodness! great job keeping everyone in character - this chapter was hilarious. can't wait to see how you write the seduction. :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
bahaha sounds fabulous already! love your writing.
| SI5EVA chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
So the plot thickens. I expect more good things. Chuckle chuckle.
| SI5EVA chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Ohohoho. Sakura, you are quite the conniving, evil mastermind. I like so far. :D
| shourin chapter 3 . 7/21/2010
and do tell me, where arer the other chapters? lol
| SI5EVA chapter 3 . 7/10/2010
Oh, poor Ino, the woes of blackmail... Pfft, who am I kidding? I love it! 8D
That was obscenely hilarious and practically overflowing with awesomeness. The characters couldn't have had better roles in this interestingly cute but diabolical romantic comedy. Who can resist the allure of Konoha's top kunoichi plotting for the good of a blonde mind-controller? I certainly can't, especially when you write as well as you do. ;)
Please update soon; shockingly enough, I'm sure the best is yet to come. x3
| Cutiedust chapter 3 . 6/6/2010
OMG! I couldn't stop laughing that was sooo hilarious! keep it up :]
| Alis Volat Propris chapter 3 . 8/26/2009
Wonderful. Love the humor in your fics. would love to see this finished.
| Devil'sLittleBabyGirl chapter 3 . 6/18/2009
You're now officially my new fav writer. What can I say? You're just too amazing to be ignored. Keep this story flowing, can't wait to see what will Ino do, with her usual crazyness..
| BlackRoseMuffin chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
I like the pick-up lines.
| iNsAnE nO bAkA chapter 3 . 6/1/2009
OMG! *dies laughing* This is awesome and it hasn't even gotten to the good part yet! :P
| Mooncatcher chapter 3 . 1/23/2009
Okay. Here's a good one: My lips are skittles, wanna taste the rainbow? Hahahahaha.
Poor Shikamaru. No idea what he's in for.
Fab story! Love it!