|Reviews for The Pitfalls of Seduction|
| sophia666 chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
interesting, and funny. I trying to see Shikamaru's face when ino tries to use a pick-up line on him. Great writing. Please update soon.
| ChristinaAngel chapter 3 . 12/18/2007
This is really funny! I especially liked it when they were reading out the pick up lines. I laughed so much that my brother ran away from me in fear! A double bonus. Please update soon!
| pavement-greengrass chapter 3 . 11/20/2007
| Kyoshi7989 chapter 3 . 11/17/2007
You're a genius, I swear.
...An amazing, inspiring, comedian GENIUS.
| SarcasticallyTroublesomeGirl chapter 3 . 10/24/2007
Omfg, Lol, that's hilarious. Poor Ino, I'd be banging my head too. Well, unless I was one of the other three. Then I 'd probably die from lack of oxygen. But I would've died happy. That's all that matters, right? Lol, so great chapter. I loved it. So much. Especially the Shika bits where he feels like something's coming. Lol, can't wait for the next update.
| SarcasticallyTroublesomeGirl chapter 2 . 10/24/2007
This seems really good and interesting. It's hilarious too. I love it already. I loved how the three were acting when she was sitting down. My favorite line is "What do you want sakura? A new kimono? A shopping spree? My soul?" Lol, that line had me rotf.
| NanbeiNoHana chapter 3 . 10/10/2007
Update as soon as you can, I'm curious about this :-)
| Xkissxdeathxbrex chapter 3 . 9/22/2007
reveiw NOW! lol jjk. olz review
| AniMeViEtGrl chapter 3 . 9/18/2007
So far this has been an amusing read and an amazingly well written story! i'm looking forward to reading some more! ]
| Sasuke Lover chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
This is good. I only skimmed through it though... I've always been too lazy to even read anything more than read 2 short paged chapters. Exept one time when I was in like 4th grade... After all I am only in 5th Grade...
| lovely dove chapter 2 . 9/18/2007
I love shikaino! for a second there, i though it was temari. Hey, Hinata isn't a medic nin. Sakura and Ino are! And it seems sakura is more skilled than ino unfortunately. love the story!
| Kawaii Kabu chapter 3 . 9/18/2007
| mood ink chapter 3 . 9/18/2007
wew, can't wait for the next chap!
| mood ink chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
| Daxo chapter 3 . 9/17/2007
love the fic
i have the picture of the girls carrying shikamaru tied and naruto just see them and shikamaru tell him "i told you"
i dont know why
well see you later bye