Reviews for Striving For Perfection
Yurilover90 chapter 10 . 6/12/2009
Wow...I just found this story today and I am well and truly hooked! I think this is the 9th review for this chapter, so, though it hasn't been updated in a while, I will be a picture of hopeful patience. This is a fantastic fic and I can hardly wait to see more from you! -
Rachel452 chapter 10 . 4/17/2009
Damn. This hasn't been updated in a very long time. That's a shame cuz I'm into it!
kitty chapter 10 . 6/9/2008
love it. please continue. and hey you didnt say anytning witty about the review button. awe i miss it. lol
kitty chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Just because you said : You see that sexy review button? Click it. It’ll show you a good time.' am i reviewing it. i thought it was interesting. different and could use a little more character work but good.
WaterGhost chapter 10 . 12/16/2007
Update soon! As in really soon. Love where this is going.
Stellar Raven chapter 10 . 9/17/2007
So...been a while. Howsabout an update?

Updates are good.
WolfgalX chapter 10 . 6/13/2007
Loved this chapter. I'm kinda mad at Ren for being so stupid but at least Tawny made a really great nurse. I wouldn't mind if she took care of me. I can't wait to find out what kind of secrets Tawny's keeping in. Great writing as always, my only problem is that Review Button Joe is totally not as shmexy as Shmexy Purple Review Button was. When Shmexy Button comes back it better be hotter than ever...or else.
Hads337 chapter 10 . 6/10/2007
AH this was super super good!

what the hell was ren thinking?

and Tawny... she made such a perfect little nurse...

It took me a minute to figure out what Ren was mumbling... but then i got it and i like literally said oh out loud. lol

Oh bravo, my dear. Great update. Bring us more.
Cain chapter 10 . 6/8/2007
ah, good work! very intense! dramatic! holding fast to your title, Mighty (or rather, Weepy) Emo Queen.

I want to know about the skeletons in Tawny's closet...

And glad to see the paramedic there after our little discussion...

And, I'm just not feelin' Review Button Joe... I mean... I'd really connected with his twin and now he just leaves for a week? Without even saying goodbye? I thought we'd gotten to that place where, you know, we told each other stuff... We have to communicate or this relationship is never going to work, Smexy! *sobs* Just leaving me here like this... you and my #1.5 Ho gone too... *weeps profusely*
SilverTurtle chapter 10 . 6/8/2007
Awesome. Wow. Just...wow.
persephone.aphrodite chapter 3 . 6/6/2007
vagas eh?
persephone.aphrodite chapter 2 . 6/6/2007
I dont see any strip dance this is bs

good story so far, why was ren crying ? does tawny remember the hobo at her house?
WolfgalX chapter 9 . 6/5/2007
Ohh! Melikey stripping electronic buttons...but would it take off? Ain't it pretty much naked alredy?

Anywho, off of that brain-melting ponder...I'm glad this story finally got an update and it's good to see it's still as good as ever. I'm pretty sure my counting skills are still up to par so I'd say this is the 3rd review!
SilverTurtle chapter 9 . 6/5/2007
Excellent update, as usual. I was checking for it nearly every day! And then I go away for a while and of course that's when you update! Goodness. Well, at least it was entertaining. Keep up the good work. Can't hardly wait for the next chapter.
Stellar Raven chapter 9 . 6/3/2007
Woot! Update!

Man, every time I start to think this story's been abandoned, it rises from the ashes. And it still kicks just as much ass.

I really love the idea of Ren being sick of being Ren. The notion of a perfectionist cracking under the strain of not knowing how to be anything else really appeals to me, for some reason, and I love that this story doesn't seem to follow the standard formula for a romance fic.

I expect more soon. Or else mimes. Yes, mimes. Do not tempt me.
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