|Reviews for Intertwining Souls|
| Rebekah chapter 1 . 7/17
OK first off I must complain about how you didn't continue. A good fanficton always has at least 10 chapters. Also you should've found a way for them to be together before the baby is born instead of sending it away pleas continue your story and do better I bleave that any body can do a good job and you had a good start it just needs to be longer
| lolitathegoddessorca860 chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
| maximushyrule chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
awesome you should continue this!
| Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
| Anime Wildfire chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
aw! This is a really cute story! I hope you make this a very long story!