Reviews for Of Smiles
humble beginnings chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
Wow that is so cute D! You do an awesome job on all your fics!
fairybitch chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
It's so cute and sweet! I think I might have a few cavities :) this has been one of the few naru/saku stories i have actually enjoyed, awesome job!
Dark Hope Assassin chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
I love the way that you made this little ficlet. It was definitely cute in various ways-how TenTen and Neji fight endlessly yet never too passionately for it is, indeed, Neji that we're talking about, how Naruto has always adored Sakura and helped her out and she still never noticed him and thought him annoying in her younger years, how she always misinterpreted how things came out in situations such as the one with the mud. But I most definitely loved the connection you made with the dream-Sakura and the real one smiling at Naruto when he told her what he thinks of her. It was definitely an award-winning moment.

You're brilliant and your style is so wonderful, as is your understanding for the characters. Loved it all so much! Good job writing it!
King of slackers chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
it was really good, i liked it a lot.
madelynthemaddy chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
This is on of the best, sweetest, and perfect pieces of work i have seen! The instinct thing a the begging and then finding out it was Chouji that was the one ment to pick her up. Then the last line was genius! Absolute genius! Just the way he was just happy that she knew she was pretty AND she smiled (squee!).
KKYOKO chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
Cute!
Sailor Taurus Angel chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
This was really good! Exspecially for you not even liking Sakura! It was definatly worth stumbling upon! Great work! Definatly reached my cuteness quota! ;p
Korin chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
AW! That's so cute! Really adorable, especially the flashbacks! Luv it!
lirpa-chan chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
One of the sweetest NaruSaku fics I've read *heart*. I really liked how this was written, from the flashbacks to the present. Such a simple story that had a lot to say _. I also liked the characterization of Tenten and Neji- especially the dialogue!

Excellent work!

Eraya _
Nakasu Malakiel chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
yehaa very good.

bye
Sheo Darren chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
Curse those diet plans

Diets only dehydrate you. They'll get you sick and weak. Look what happened to Morales this Sunday. Manny ate him alive in just three rounds. Besides, girls are better if they're a bit plu-

*gets killed*

Since age six, Uzumaki Naruto had studied thousands of female anatomies in porn mags and adult graphic novels just so he could sculpt the perfect form for his notorious Sexy no Jutsu that brought down several great men into a pool of nosebleed, including the Sandaime and the Jiraiya-sama himself.

He DID? NARUTO! YOU-

“CHANCE!”

Agreed! (Opportunity only knocks once, after all. _) But noble and expected of Naruto NOT to take advantage of Sakura.

“You’re not exactly Mr. Friendster Happy Face, so that’s understandable.”

“Tenten, quit acting like Lee.”

Never! Don't give in to Neji, Ten!

“Only if you quit acting like Mr. Grouchy.”

“I do not know any man who comes by that name.”

Nyahahahaha! Cute- even coming from the likes of Neji!

A darling story! Luv it! *worships*
mandarin'peel chapter 1 . 11/18/2006
aw naruto seems more calm and together in this story, but its still so adorable!
mhaves chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
isn't that cute ?
milkmoth chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
So adorable! _ It made me smile.
Seductive Venus chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
Wow! I never thought I'd see the day you'd sit down and pen a NaruSaku! XD But then I'll go thank Na-san for asking you this. It's a beautiful story that really warmed my heart despite the November cold! Your wit and humor still shines! Your fluffiness still intact! And most of all, nakakakilig pa rin! XD I loved the memory. Even if you pretended to dislike the boy who did something nice and gave you a compliment, he'll still stay in mind. And those boys are the best! I like Naruto here so much. Sensitive, sweet, and witty enough to catch them off-guard. Thanks for such a nice story! :D

btw, musta na nga pala ate syao? wala na kaming naririnig galing sau! :D *hugs* always with love, aya-chan
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