Reviews for Trial or Error
SquiggytheMage chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
want more!
Shiro Inutoko chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
I want to see more of this.
kennyk12 chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
not rally any spelling mistaks as far as i could see.

VERY good writing also.

update when you can!]

the elephants stole my weed.
Morrolan chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
Interesting...looking forward to seeing where this goes...that is if you are going to write more to it.
Alipeeps chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
Wow. That is a very interesting concept. I look forward to seeing where this story goes.
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
Awesome idea!
Janiqua chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
Now there's an interesting concept. What, does John belong to the Wraith from Common Ground now? Geez... You should keep going with this. Very interesting.
Emma chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
That's a fascinating theory...and kinda dark, character-wise. From what I've seen so far, you could really take this to interesting places!
highonscifi chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
Wow! Great start! You've managed to get my mind literally reeling with the possibilities for upcoming chapters. Can't wait to see where you take this!
TangledPencils chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
Interesting idea and twist here, I think you should continue this idea into a longer story, there's plenty of potential.

Good work.
SqueakyChewToy chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
This is an original and interesting idea. I'll definitely be reading this story.