|Reviews for The Sands of Destiny|
| lara5170 chapter 4 . 7/13
I have enjoyed reading this but it looks as if it is not being continued. I wish there was more
| lara5170 chapter 3 . 7/13
I thought it stated that Atem and Kagome spoke to each other about Kagome's life in Japan and Atem's life as pharaoh before she fell asleep but she never told him her name?
| lara5170 chapter 1 . 7/13
These desert people weren't surprised that she had a winged wolf with her?
| Ishara chapter 4 . 7/6
I know it's been a long time since you updated this story. I don't know if your still interested in continuing it. But as with alot of your stories, I love how you've writen it and the storyline.
I am by no means a critic or a writer. I'm just a simple reader and I love your stories.
Thank you for writing them.
| Sapphire Assassin 30 chapter 4 . 2/1
good job sad to hear that you are low on ideas. hmm take ur time good job so far. maybe a love triangle between kagome atem and seto coul form. seto seems smitten with her also lol
| isabel chapter 4 . 1/22
you are right about Kisara
| Sapphire Assassin 30 chapter 2 . 12/7/2016
interesting first 2 chaps. good job keep it up
| Ondine de la Mer chapter 3 . 8/4/2016
I think what you're looking for is a vanity. Also, the black eyeliner is called Kohl. I like this fic, can't wait for the next update.
| Ondine de la Mer chapter 2 . 8/3/2016
I like the plot of this story, and I can't say I've seen it done before. I like it a bunch. At the top of this chapter, you wrote that Kagome wished for sunscreen. So here's an interesting fact that I just learned recently: Japanese people do not use sunscreen. Seriously, my mom's friend is a fluent Japanese speaker and visits Japan regularly. And she was talking about how if you want sunscreen in Japan, you're gonna have to bring it yourself. Shops just don't have it. She said the best sunscreen she ever found was SPF 2 in this way off-the-beaten-path store once. So yeah, not a criticism, because how the heck were you supposed to know that, but just some information that I thought was both interesting and relevent. So yeah. I'm gonna keep reading this now.
| LeannaHime chapter 4 . 6/4/2016
Please update. I love this story.
| kiki8o chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
don't worry in the anime when kagome goes back 500 years she understand everything and thats not normal, they talked old japanese or something so they should go and bother rumiko
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/17/2015
I'm dying here (not really hahahaXP) please more updates!
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/5/2015
I do hope you update please
| scarlettravencrove chapter 4 . 6/13/2015
Hope you continue this was amazing !~
| 4Eva Dreaming chapter 3 . 5/11/2015
This chapter was so long it was absolutely wonderful! Especially the fight scenes and how Kagome totally kicked Bakura's ass I'm really glad you made her so skilled without being completley over powered :D