Reviews for The Sands of Destiny
Sapphire Assassin 30 chapter 4 . 2/1
good job sad to hear that you are low on ideas. hmm take ur time good job so far. maybe a love triangle between kagome atem and seto coul form. seto seems smitten with her also lol
isabel chapter 4 . 1/22
you are right about Kisara
Sapphire Assassin 30 chapter 2 . 12/7/2016
interesting first 2 chaps. good job keep it up
Ondine de la Mer chapter 3 . 8/4/2016
I think what you're looking for is a vanity. Also, the black eyeliner is called Kohl. I like this fic, can't wait for the next update.
Ondine de la Mer chapter 2 . 8/3/2016
I like the plot of this story, and I can't say I've seen it done before. I like it a bunch. At the top of this chapter, you wrote that Kagome wished for sunscreen. So here's an interesting fact that I just learned recently: Japanese people do not use sunscreen. Seriously, my mom's friend is a fluent Japanese speaker and visits Japan regularly. And she was talking about how if you want sunscreen in Japan, you're gonna have to bring it yourself. Shops just don't have it. She said the best sunscreen she ever found was SPF 2 in this way off-the-beaten-path store once. So yeah, not a criticism, because how the heck were you supposed to know that, but just some information that I thought was both interesting and relevent. So yeah. I'm gonna keep reading this now.
LeannaHime chapter 4 . 6/4/2016
Please update. I love this story.
kiki8o chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
don't worry in the anime when kagome goes back 500 years she understand everything and thats not normal, they talked old japanese or something so they should go and bother rumiko
Guest chapter 4 . 10/17/2015
I'm dying here (not really hahahaXP) please more updates!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/5/2015
I do hope you update please
scarlettravencrove chapter 4 . 6/13/2015
Hope you continue this was amazing !~
4Eva Dreaming chapter 3 . 5/11/2015
This chapter was so long it was absolutely wonderful! Especially the fight scenes and how Kagome totally kicked Bakura's ass I'm really glad you made her so skilled without being completley over powered :D
4Eva Dreaming chapter 2 . 5/11/2015
XD what a way to end the chapter. This was amazing great job!
4Eva Dreaming chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
:D Kya~ I totally love this and am SUPER glad she didn't sit there and explain her whole story. In ither stories it always bothers me when the author has her explain herself to people who are practically strangers. Also how old is Kagome in this story? Is she around 24?
Fantaku alliance chapter 4 . 3/31/2015
You could write some "meanwhile" type chapters with Souta meeting yuugi and co.
Also, you could make Kagsy encounter a spider and have a aracniphobia thingy introduced
There is also her friends, is this before or after, cause I have two different ideas for those.

Before: young Sesshy could want to play the duel monsters game to get more land or another thing, so he challenges Atem to play and encounters Kagsy

After: Sesshou, koga, and Shippo go to Egypt because Lord Fluffy-Maru has to meet with the young pharaoh, and they sense Kagome

This is a really good story by the way, dont abandon it.
rhizz17 chapter 4 . 3/22/2015
Update please
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