|Reviews for SilverStar|
| LucyLuna chapter 1 . 8/2
"remote, distained fashion." "distained" should be "disdained."
This would have read a little easier if you separated their POVs with a line break or something too. The hard switch there between Hermione and Severus's views really took me out of the story and confused me.
As this is right now, it feels like it has some potential. I'd be very curious to see how Dumbledore's wrongdoings are slowly revealed and to see more of Severus's story unfold and to see how you'd explain his backstory with Harry's mother and the Marauders and all of that. Is it really his history? Or did the actual Snape die at some point and Dumbledore used Severus as a fill-in to keep that under wraps?
| slyhuff chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
are you going to continue with this? its a goodish start
| Whoopsydaisy chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
I like the story so far! I find it interesting that Severus might stand out to Hermione in a sort of positive way because of the fact that he doesn't constantly praise her intelligence. I look forward to reading more. :)
| Megan Consoer chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| Erin chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
you need to put in page breakers.