Reviews for √Čomar meet's Athena
Fiery Dragon164 chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
Lol! The part about the beard is hilarious. Continue?
Rodidor chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
the last sentence was funny
Miss Quartermain chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
so far so good. you oughta read my story! It's got Eomer in it.
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
Dear heart...your idea may have been good, but you are in SERIOUS need of a beta...this story's closet needs a thorough sweeping. ;P There are a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. There also seems to be too much power in the beginning. ;\ It makes things too easy, and adds difficulty to developing a proper "problem" that can lead the readers through to the "climax" and be solved/succumbed to somewhere at or between climax, falling action, and true end. A mite more historical research may be helpful as well.

All in all, it seems this could end up a good story. I don't understand the references particularly well, but that might be that I've been awake far too long. Try cleaning it up a little. Also, you haven't updated in almost a month. ;) Not very kind if you have gained any readers in that time.

Good luck!

~TheWonderfulShoe
the counter chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
Congratulations! Your excellent example of fanfiction has been added to my esteemed C2.

Enjoy!

the counter
BubbleGumEcstasy chapter 1 . 11/18/2006
lol oh man he's kinda weird lol.
wondereye chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
it's a good fighting story; hope you continue.