Reviews for The Beginning of the End
Ranyxa chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
This has been a really entertaining read. But cut the formalities. mine, I mean. Reading this story made me believe that this was what really happened when It happened. Don't ask me what It is, 'cos I don't know either. Aw, don't keep us all hanging in suspense here! Please? (Anime puppy-dog eyes) Please update quickly! I totally can't wait for the update. If you don't update, I might as well hang myself! T_T
DarkSharinganXIII chapter 3 . 12/28/2006
sorry that i've been dead-ish. loving it so far. go Ienzo, my beloved Ienzo...don't ask...
Fate Defied chapter 3 . 11/15/2006
No please continue! This is awesome. I liked this chapter a lot. The line ‘I can’t believe I…failed.’ really brought Even/Vexen into character. And for some reason, I really liked it when Eleaus/Lexaeus said “This wasn’t planned…Xehanort.” The sad part was Braig's, and when he said he wished he could have seen Ienzo smile again.

A truly wonderful chapter. Keep going please! You're doing a great job. :)

~the White Raven
Fate Defied chapter 2 . 11/15/2006
A cliffhanger huh? Very nicely done if I do say so myself. Went a little quick for me, but all the same, I liked how it was Ienzo who led Ansem down to the secret lab. The line I especially liked the most was "...What ever happened to my young, eager assistant?" "He grew up,” Ienzo said. Very good play on emotions there. Keep up the great work.

~the White Raven
Fate Defied chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
Wonderful job so far. I'm a fan of these kind of stories. Yes, please post the next chapter! I can't wait to see what you do with this story, and how you write everyone. So far, so good. You're doing a splendid job with keeping everyone in character. Keep it up. :)

~the White Raven
Eva Drayon chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
i wanna see what happens!
DarkSharinganXIII chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
Could be good if you keep going. And, Ienzo is emo, wether he says so or not.