Reviews for And He Returns
LoliBat chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
wow. perfect balence b/w angst and romance
Rawkin Paradox chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
I...Loved it!
Vermillion Dragoness chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Woah O_O So angsty. And also, So very very GOOD! :D Poor Cloud T_T Whenever their relationship is portrayed this way it reminds me of the song that goes "I. Hate. Everything about you / Why. do I. Love you?" Forget the name...anyway! Keep up the good work!
CornCob chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Very impressive.

I usually sway away from the Jerk-Seph stories, but this one was really good.
Someday Eternity chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Ooh... angst angst viil viil kyneel ;D no, seriously. Poor Cloud :/ he did the right thing though *nods her head* you're not supposed to play with other's feelings and Sephiroth deserved to die and burn in hell for messing with the poor emo kid *nods her head again*
silenceinlight chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
This was a very good story. Well written, save for the fact that you switch from I/You to I/He. Your next writing should probably stick to one of the other as it makes the story a bit jerky. Overall though it was very very good and heartbreaking. I particularly loved Cloud's last sentence.
cloud-shadows chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
I love this story. It's so well written-the emotions especially, but it's so sad.