Reviews for Accountable
EagleJarl chapter 13 . 12/7/2014
So, have you had kids of your own, or have you just done really thorough research? Because that was an extremely detailed list of the miseries involved.
EagleJarl chapter 12 . 12/7/2014
Glad to see that Hermione made it out of the dream unscathed. I was expecting her worst fears to involve the baby being dead or some such. Good that it was chess, where Snape could help.

Wow, Snape blew his cover a bit there at the end. Yes, he's starting to fall for Hermione, but not too smart to actively seek contact. Once the two of them end up together it's going to be fascinating watching how they interact. Both brilliant, one's a know it all and the others is a snotty jackass...yeah, smooth sailing all the way.
EagleJarl chapter 11 . 12/6/2014
Oh boy. This can't be good. I hope this isn't a "and then the baby died and we spent the next 20 chapters bringing them to justice" story.

I like how Snape is slowly warming up to Hermione. It's believable and you really have to feel for the guy. He's in a bad situation no matter what he does. Your handling of Draco is also good - it's nice to see his personality develop a third dimension.
Guest chapter 31 . 11/24/2014
This story is one of my all time favourites. I have read it countless times, much in a fashion as I read "Jane Eyre" as a teenager when I could not sleep or tried to forget one worry or another.
Beside the finely chiselled plot I like the totally beliefable characterisations and the slow pace. Thank you very much!
mama123 chapter 31 . 11/4/2014
A high quality amazing fic. This my third read. Loved it!
Armate chapter 31 . 11/4/2014
Hello Dyce,

I am absolutely impressed by your incredible storytelling. Wow. The dialogue, all the characters (so realistic and deep and really likeable), the plot, the difficult questions (guilt, responsibility - not only those from/about Hermione)... I loved how you included scenes with so many varied people, also minor characters. All of these scenes were beautiful and meaningful. I loved how slowly you revealed the past, how visible the scars of war are in your stories, how you showed us the impact fighting together had on everyone... how wonderfully subtle you show emotions and develop relationships. I have very rarely seen anything like this. Totally blown away. :)

Another thing that was just beautiful was the whole pregnancy, birth, and how she was with Martin... My child came via an emergency Caesarean and I nearly lost him; what I had dreamed about to be very similar to what you describe here was highly traumatic for all involved in the end... and it was so good to read so realistically about a pregnancy where everything goes well and as it should. Thank you for that. It was a little step towards healing for me.

There was a lot more, but I will finish here. Ah. I wish the pictures Colin made were real, you described them so beautifully... :)

Have a lovely day, and thank you for an extraordinary story!

Sue Donym chapter 31 . 10/2/2014
Yay! I do love me some slow-burn. And all the characterizations were lovely, especially our dear Draco. Your Severus was extremely Snapeish, and even Ron and Harry were well-done (poor Ron often gets bashed in HG/SS fic, doesn't he?).

Thanks so much for writing this!
whatweareafreaidof chapter 9 . 10/2/2014
interesting story, one never did lie to get attition and calling his a idiots brother does not help, and like how even ron was there for hermoine, good story.
dorothy chapter 31 . 9/16/2014
Lovely story. I particularly enjoy the way you develop the growing maturity of the characters (finally, a Harry growing up!). Thank you for all the work you put into this!
jensteed chapter 3 . 8/29/2014
Brilliant story so far, I'm really enjoying it. I haven't come across Dumbledore as a ghost before so I can't wait to see what shenanigans he gets up to, haha
hermionefan1983 chapter 31 . 8/1/2014
i hate when these type of stories end with a sad or something ending! so thanks for making it a funny and HAPPY ending XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
hermionefan1983 chapter 31 . 8/1/2014
severus is fat? cool :-)

Otherwise, so far as he could tell, he looked much the same - aside from the terrible indignity of a slightly thickened waistline, which his robes fortunately concealed.
hermionefan1983 chapter 30 . 8/1/2014
what happend NEXT? over the years?
hermionefan1983 chapter 31 . 8/1/2014
"That's revolting, it really is. You two are grandparents now, you shouldn't still be getting all romantic." Draco grinned. "Of course, you two have always been disgustingly sentimental."

there GRANDPARENTS NOW? how did that happen i mean Martin was a baby before but i guess YEARS have pasted? is draco still in love with hermione? how many children so hermione and severus have? also is draco married? are hermione and severus okey? health wise? is there a sequal?
hermionefan1983 chapter 29 . 7/31/2014
"Little something we've been working on." Fred displayed a small bottle, smirking. "Doesn't have an official name yet, but we've been calling it the Anti-Censor Solution."
"The what?"
"It lowers the inhibitions," George explained. "Like alcohol, but without nearly as many side-effects. Lets out your inner... whatever." He grinned at his brother. "Fred has an inner exhibitionist. First time we tested it, he ran the length of Diagon Alley starkers."
Fred chuckled. "And I wish I remembered it. The early batches made the tester forget all about whatever had happened while they were under the influence. We thought it'd be funnier, though, if they could remember later. So George remembers every happy detail of what happened when he asked Parvati and Padma Patil if they'd be interested in a threesome."

that was in the drink severus had THATS why he cant rememeber it? but why can hermione?
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