|Reviews for Mark Hunting 'Round the World|
| Jamielordofgingers chapter 6 . 2/17/2008
you should do non marks as well, like the hell wyrm
| Dynast-Kid chapter 5 . 6/22/2007
Yay! You went with my suggestion for Deathscythe! It was an awesome chapter!
But I was getting so excited for more chapters...:(
Well, I hope you change your mind.
| thermopylae chapter 4 . 5/31/2007
What is this "complete" status I see? Boo - I hope you will change your mind; other Marks would be great, not just the Gil Snapper! But no pressure - it was still loads of fun :D
I loved Vaan and Balthier duking it out for Leading Man lines, and how Balthier makes up the whole contest in his head XD Also, I think you meant "Her Majesty," not His. Sorry, small quibble :X Thanks again for the read!
| garoda chapter 4 . 5/28/2007
Those four hunts were incredible, you have to add more ok. I can't wait to see them if you do.
| Dynast-Kid chapter 3 . 5/21/2007
Great chapter! A little short on action, but it was nice.
Right more please! You should do one about the Vorpal Bunny, or Deathscythe. Those would be the bomb-diggidy!
| thermopylae chapter 3 . 5/16/2007
Yay you updated! This chapter was so great XD I loved the Orthros battle once my levels were high enough to fight it - just sat back and watched the ladies kick butt. And I don't know why everyone (not you) rags on Penelo! She has saved the day so many times for me. Wah, anyway, you chose a great Mark for this chapter. Do another one son!
| m o o g l e d a i m e chapter 3 . 4/23/2007
OoH! Are you willing to do one with Gilgamesh? All the marks always frustrated me whenever it took too long or scared me when my party wasn't several levels higher than it, but I really enjoyed hunting Gilgamesh even though I had to defeat him twice and get deeper into the mines. His flambouyance was a nice change from all the other marks. That last bit with Ashe looking back when he took his sword was funny.
Marks that require special conditions like the Trickster and Fafnir who only appear in snowstorms or the Gil Snapper who only appear in heavy rain sound like fun also.
| thermopylae chapter 2 . 2/11/2007
I cannot stop laughing at this! You do an amazing job of balancing (gory!) action with comedy. Your Basch is hilarious without breaking character. He's such a good straight man being forced through the craziness.
Anyway, I'm off to read the rest. I can't wait to see your take on the Gil Snapper - it took me well over ten tries to kill it, and the feeling of triumph when I finally did was scarily genuine...
| Dynast-Kid chapter 2 . 2/1/2007
I'm still waiting for the third chapter...
| Dynast-Kid chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
This is so good. You wouldn't believe how much I laughed at the part where Malthier called the Wyvern Lord's mother a Cockatrice! And I also found the part where Fran sacrificed herself funny too.
Although, the little bits involving dismemberment are a bit strange, I kinda like them. 0_o...
Anyways, I think you should write a chapter on the White Mousse! That mofo is hella tough and i'd love to read a story about him.
Keep on writing, ho!
| Tiger5913 chapter 2 . 12/2/2006
Ah, yes, I vote for the Gil Snapper too. That guy from the Hunt Clan that helps out your party is awesome. He cast Protect and Shell on all my members while we were fighting. XD And also, as a side note, I noticed some Balthier x Fran in the first chapter. Think you can whip up a little Vaan x Ashe too, please?
| bucklebunny chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
yay! i just fought that! anyways, the cast was in character as much as i can tell (i haven't beaten the game either), and the story was well-written. good job! i also thought your interpretation on how the characters take damage was funny. i know that they can die and be resurrected, but arms and ears flying all over the place? now i'm gonna be thinking about that every time i fight a difficult battle!
now mean stuff: hm... basch could have been a little more in character (not that he was in it for more than a sentence). oh! and there could have been some more "ups" in the battle, like they gain a little ground or something, just to keep the fight interesting and intense.
whenever i finish a one-shot i never want to touch it again, but i think it would be cool if you did some more hunt-related one-shots after this one. just an idea...
oh and you rock for writting FFXII stories... people need to stop playing the game and start writting! (actually, no. that's stupid. i'm gonna go throw my brother off the ps2 so i can play now) _
| Andrew Joshua Talon chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
Heh. The Gil Snapper always gave me the most trouble. Took me ten tries to finally kill it. Not expending all my Mist Charges from the start was a lesson that was hard-learned. Think I could write one of these as well, or if not, that you could write about the battle against the Gil Snapper?
Cluckatrice wasn't so bad, but taking it on with only two party members is extremely stupid...
| Janiqua chapter 1 . 11/16/2006
“Your mother’s a Cockatrice!”
I thought that line was hilarious! Good taunting!